Black Poetry : seniltuo a wodahs

[jahvandus]

outline a shadow
forever Eden vanishes
dawn before titles
etched in molasses
copper angels named her
dreamland Venus
soul searching
along side willow streams
mirroring my destiny
swiveled past life
my yolk was she
but now an interlude
brown sugar anthems
breathing cinnamon violets
we
……………….she
……………………………….me
creamed neo-song’s reality
clipping her binds
sublime mental new
soul mate found
stipulations concurred
forever not now dawn
an outline of her shadow
with eucalyptus molds
to fill inside lines
gone now
wishing I knew life
with no pain
but would I be mars
without gravity


Jahvandus Kwu

 

[UbZoRbShUn]

ouch...

I'm sorry! Ask yourself this, would she be Venus without her Mars? Sometimes life is interupted to show you a different path in which to journey. Things change, birth, death, growth.

I don't think your Venus meant to hurt you nor is she gone forever. You know this and you also know she will be there for you in every way imaginable. It's better to have than to have not. I know you are both stronger for it and she, if she hasn't read this knows your heart and felt this piece before it was even scribed.

Jahvandus, we grow with life lessons learned and I wish we all knew life without pain and I wish that I could take yours away, but like you said would that be reality?

One

 

[$$RICH$$]

O ~ MY !

SO MUCH DEPTH
SO TYGHT
AND DAYUMM POET YA FLOW
IS HITTING ME HARD
GOTTA GO READ IT AGAIN!
SAY IT ! SAY IT! SAY IT!!!

 

[LISTERSCRIBIN']

wowww, i'm feelin' all of this to the fullest, even the replies. thank you for this piece.

~~freeyomindasyouletitflo~~

 

[alyce]

this

is what I'm talking about jah! Except I could never express it this well!

thank you!

a