Black Poetry : sending me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Apr 10, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my eyes are closed--
    and thoughts of the purest silk--
    that lie untouched--
    in between you ring true to my senses--

    you are sending me--

    to the orgasmic epicenter of myself--
    yet...
    needing you nonetheless--
    wet...
    tight...
    gripping me--
    e a s i l y
    s t e a d i l y
    i don't want to miss--
    any nook or cranny of you that I might--
    overlook--

    you are sending me--

    obliviously--
    in to majestic feilds of black butterflies--
    resting upon a chocolate frame--
    effortlessly--
    an extension of myself--
    can only begin to do justice to
    what you taste to me...

    you are sending me--

    relentlessly--
    grasping for you--
    with primal tenacity--
    the smell of you--
    is

    sending me

    into
    a deeper self--
    a self that needs to--
    feel u
    now.


    (is you with me?)

    sean.
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEAN....

    now see... there you go again!!

    HELL YEAH!... you KNOW i'm wit cha!
    & i'm hanging on... with every poetic breath i possess.

    this was... this was... indescribable... all i do know for
    certain is... that i still have a smile on my face!!

    dontstoptilyagetenough... :wink:

    AlwaysLove...
    SUNshyne~
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in the words of janet jackson...

    it's all for u.


    sean.
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankin' GSun again for feeling this peece...

    especially since it's in the upcoming book!

    (tell ya more about it if you would like to know!)
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay, sean, you sent this poetess, there. wowww, sean...i enjoyed this piece, fo sho!
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx LISTER...

    can i send u there again?

    lol

    sean
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEANY!!....

    you KNOW this is my FAVORITE!!...

    i just had to be sent "there" again... :)

    (<<<<sighing)... thank You.

    AlwaysLove...
    SunShyne~
     
  8. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoo Whee

    This is HOT HOT HOT!!
    ~MELTING~
    Jyntl
     
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    Sean

    dog you know this was flame! gotz nuthin but respect for you dog!

    Reas
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya flow Sean!!!!

    Nice...

    Peace
    GQ
     
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