Black Poetry : Sending a message !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    From my heart
    2 yours
    a message wave
    electric vibe glide
    seeking ya word
    inside is comfort
    a bit of joy
    my soulful love
    caressin & more
    sending dis to u
    to say i care
    together dis we
    bare in hugs & kisses
    from mix motions
    truely it about da
    humble devotion
    we reach the peek
    promise to keep
    inside a story we seek
    clashing strong
    never weak
    da message leak
    open ya heart
    take it in
    know it was deep
    from within
    allow me to hold ya hand
    tell u together we can
    let's fix the broken tone
    hear me as i sing dis song
    know ya worth is top on
    my list and dis i love to mix
    open and freely we speak
    yet still very unique
    da taste of grape are sour
    but da peach is like happy
    hour sweet and juicy
    sending a message to
    ya heart this where we start
    come visit , play and stay
    call me remember i'm their
    i may be broken , ole and bare
    but i am the bridge dat care
    walk on me so u know
    i am the love to da soul
    my vow was made long ago
    i promise to never let go
    so now u know !
    da message floating catch it.
    :star: :kiss: :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sending a vibe
    so strong
    An aura so powerful
    can't be wrong
    Radiating beauty
    so clear
    Lustrous and brilliant
    my dear
    Seeking devotion
    so deep
    Poeticly flowing
    messages that creep
    Heart opens up carefully
    to receive
    All the love and blessings
    we believe
    Truth in the words
    leaking from the pen
    Keep the soul stirring
    so I can read you again...

    Hope you don't mind the flow. This was deeply written and felt.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my thank u and love the flow back wow!
    happy u was able to catch it in motion ....
    Da message of hope
    is the care i wrote
    to say i am
    and what i am to be
    a love in heart
    a soul to bond
    and musicl song
    so it be written
    so it be done
    let us as people
    move in a direct
    way to a more
    perfect union
    and commonly
    compress our
    minds to da hill
    and reach da top
    not one but all
    or we fall together
    message moving
    forward fast catch it !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    send that message nice drop
    likes....Angel
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww "juicy" huh :look: very mouthwatering my brotha lol I think I'm gon have to sneak into chat under another name so I dont scare you away so that I can hear you read again lol...:) :grouphug:
     
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    thanks angel indeed this message has been sent in a wave

    thanks trin u know me i had to send it..........................
     
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    let one ear hear
    and thy message
    received within
    let the floating
    whispers tingle
    da heart to know
    dat love concore
    deep and defeat
    selfishness
    let da message
    river in waterwaves
    splashin
    to da mind
    so the soul feel da
    depth of my realism
    we know not but we
    feel indeed so as i
    shower u this hour
    wit grace & hope
    let da message be
    heard clear catch it
    before it pass u by !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The message on this friendship train is crystal, time to get on board.....
     
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    indeed sistah c'mon aboard the love train !
     
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    A very awesome piece..as they all are, my thanks for sharing this with us...the waves were indeed sent...
     
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