Black Poetry : Sellin' Love or Sex?

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nights we get together,she tells me papi undress
    i gets shawty wet,till she all sloppy,a mess
    a wreck,after i gives her the stick
    i lick my lips and shes putty in my hands ,lovesick
    she knows im flighty,i cant just be with one chick
    so she accepts the fact that i could be out in a jip
    but shes feisty,and she might be a tad bit slick
    nice eyes,nice lips,nice *** and hips
    see im mental,i dont alwayz think with my d.ick
    shawtys down,but not as down as the one that im with
    it seems like im her world,she could give a f.uck about ****
    the other one got limits,she bout had enuff of tha kid
    shes too good for me,im a bad conflicted man
    got a script that i live by and i try to stick to tha plan
    but im in a jam, a love triangle
    some will cry for you,some will love you,and some will hate you
    shes the latter,she does all 3 for me
    but what it comes down to is what i want within,deep in me
    im a romanticist, they say," playa put it to rest"
    cause they cant help wonderin if im sellin' Love or Sex...........

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was deep of what is sold
    is it love or sex only you can
    define the truth ....this was phat

    but we ask that such don't be spelled out
    like D*** and F*** these asterisk are for a reason
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU GOT IT BROTHA...MY BAD....

    THANX FOR THE FEEDBACK ON THA RAWNESS....
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oooh weeeee, lurk u layin it down. Nice to see ya once again. Much love,


    AM:)
     
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    love the way your pen flows flow on poet.:wave:
     
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    love or sex..
    when it comes 2 da battle who does it best?
    if im sellin u buying..
    cause i aint sellin to da feinds who wannna keep tryin, n tryin..
    like an 8 ball, ill get you high..
    if the sex is good enough ill make u love..



    nice drop
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm diggin this piece poet!
    Great flow!
     
  8. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fiddy sents ... what was the question

    there is a lot in the gap here I might answer to the gap next week

    Peace .... creatively done

    Patrice
     
  9. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Raw indeed!
    Why do we confuse the 2????
    Very nice drop Lurk....long time no see....

    Peace and love
    twision
     
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    Man this was love poet
    You are truely a great poet
    Much Love and yes twision
    We do confuse the two
     
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