Black Poetry : Selfish

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  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Turnin my back on you
    the pins you placed
    in my skin
    erase no problem, pain
    or sin
    when under the sun
    will i feel a jist of wind again
    See
    Si, i am told that it is fate
    but i like you
    the earth, heavens,
    holders of the harvest, elements (al_s)
    awake
    Spaghetti dreams
    with no bowls steamed
    mixed tables of veggies
    pushing me to relax
    a cause----
    keeps me more wide open
    energy anxious
    2 break lose the anchors
    maybe the youth the future's destined
    will applaud
    my story's derrogatory
    mystical encaptured
    developed memories
    ideas endeepened
    flourishing the understanding of
    actions put into flesh
    i abstain of the way you take
    my length and intoxicate me
    a play on words producin
    uneasy grounds
    like silk spreads on water beds
    leavin on your mind's lane
    deep avenues of head
    by thy heaven's grace
    tether me to any
    place or tree
    with an access to revolt
    readily
    i push onward steadily
    the chorus of imagination
    illuminated wears me
    exactly till brittle
    secluded
    will a connection from afar
    ring me post-mortal
    forever free
    or do i walk with my hand
    you're all i see
    and you for me
    continually
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well pose'd this was tyte
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enoyed this read
    flow on..... :angel1:
     
  4. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks ya'll for the feed back
    just tryin to sit down and bring forth
    some realness every time i
    put thought to the key board
    for the board...

    One l
     
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