Black Poetry : Self-Portrait

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Nov 28, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When they wanna know what

    I'm about

    Or need to know why

    They're alive

    HE's got the know-how

    You should live

    But we acting so proud

    In all things ~

    Nobody trust GOD

    We're too big

    Six-pack'n this bod

    Yo' for-real

    While reading my stars

    What's the deal

    Don't go breaking my heart

    I'm in tears

    Cause nobody trust GOD



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm
    deep
    flow
    Peace
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed very deep flow...:angel1:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa ......u expressed a deep deep vibe from inside !
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you send short but deep messages. That's a gift. Nobody Trust God...that's so true and If I were god I wouldn't trust some of us. I'm sure somebody on the earth is plotting on how they could take gods place. starting with our commander and chief....


    and I do understand u're point i went for a mental jog with this one.
     
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    don't mean to sound redundant...but this was deep to me...made me think also. you are a gifted poet.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I refuse to sound redundant (however they are all so correct) so I'll say this is an abysmal piece. Keep hittin 'em.

    blak
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The support you lend is one unfathomable gift itself!
     
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