Black Poetry : Seizure/Retarded (pt2. of the Mind Freak trilogy)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Mar 15, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    his presence intrigued me,
    The words that jumbled from his mouth
    stumbling upon each other
    inchoherent,
    his eyes rolled wildly in the back
    of his head, astonished at the world
    around him,
    his body jerked,
    lips quivered and his tongue
    hung out of his mouth,
    glass stuck out the side of his head,
    Headless
    This name that was stamped on the
    center of his forehead,
    brought him shame that night
    Detached from this world,
    he could only linger in a hellish limbo
    tat pumped through his vein's with
    each HEARTBEAT...

    His mind betrayed him and was malignent....
    he was useless
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok...now this was some :new: flavor...girl...
    Mind Freak trilogy....huh
    Girl your writing *always* captures my attention
    Intriguing flow!
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...*blush* thanks angel, i was a bit nervous about posting these pieces, but ain't nofin wrong wit posting somfin new, ya dig?
    :heart:
    -story
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dag..wow...nice scribe:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sis
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa ya on fire sis.... keep flowin
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks brota the fiyah never dies out....
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  8. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aiight...I'm feelin U let's see what's gone happen then, scribe Queen...
    on 2 pt.3...

    2fish
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not useless ..... we all and everything within the earth has a presence a purpose ....
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    flow on...
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    Peace
    Angel
     
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