Black Poetry : Sef Evaluation

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We live in the times of Babylon
    where we make deceisions without thought
    mental thought of suicied
    another way of our geneciede
    caues our government
    wants us hypnotized

    isn't it time for us to relize
    that without education
    there will never be peace
    in race relation
    so what are we contemplating
    is it the strugle of our own enabisions
    or just jealousy of the next man
    look around you
    and what do you see

    now take some time
    and step back
    then check yourself
    now take a look in a mirror
    and then think about
    that man you hate
    and see how much
    you two really do relate

    isn't it a shame
    that in this day and age
    that you and I can't even relate
    see, that sadens me
    and I wounder
    is that what keeps us blind?
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Self evaluation

    We live in the times of Babylon
    where we make deceisions without thought
    mental thought of suicied
    another way of our geneciede
    caues our government
    wants us hypnotized

    isn't it time for us to relize
    that without education
    there will never be peace
    in race relation
    so what are we contemplating
    is it the strugle of our own enabisions
    or just jealousy of the next man
    look around you
    and what do you see

    now take some time
    and step back
    then check yourself
    now take a look in a mirror
    and then think about
    that man you hate
    and see how much
    you two really do relate

    isn't it a shame
    that in this day and age
    that you and I can't even relate
    see, that sadens me
    and I wounder
    is that what keeps us blind?
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome, welcome, welcome
    please make yourself at home...because you are.
    Wonderful piece poet, and yes, we can start with the mirror, but it goes so much deeper and father back then that, some of us look in the mirror daily, and only see the phyisal...and it stops there.
    I like your style poet, and your pen spills truth.
    and again ...welcome aboard.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said ................well felt !!
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome to the family of love as i bless dis
    from above tyte drop happy to have u join the family

    continue to flow sho love as love is given welcome !!!!
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The biggest change begins with self. I appreciate what you're saying with this. Welcome to Destees. Hope to read more from you.
     
  6. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow I didn't know that I would get this much love from you all. Thanks.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Defiantson
    I really enjoy the flow of your poems poet.
    So true indeed the times we now live in
    that divide our emotion and thoughts
    without education we would again be misplace
    To much time is wasted in hatred of others
    and one self...very awesome drop..

    Peace and Love
     
  8. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much wow this is a old piece too.
     
  9. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling this poet rock on.:smooch::welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone:
     
  10. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Nevar
     
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