Black Poetry : Seen With Two Eyes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nabraska, Aug 7, 2004.

  1. nabraska

    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's so beautiful
    like fresh fallen snow
    on a starry night
    seen from a mountain top.
    Like a snaggle-tooth 6 year old
    not bothered by from the cold
    youngsta' just has to go--
    and build that snowman!!
    See them playin', innocence
    like the snow they make
    angels in. So much beauty, again and again.

    Did you see those notes--??
    wrapped together in envelopes
    floating to the clouds.....
    When the ancestors get the message
    they'll be proud.
    Looking down on the little child
    who struggled so much.
    They did their best to instill
    trust--in that one.
    Felt good that the work
    wasn't done in vain.
    Now they laugh, and watch him playing....
    It's beautiful
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribing really enoyed the read
    welcome again and thanks for sharing.....Angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The beauty in a child especially your own, at play. I could feel the love in this. Very nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done u expressed this so well it's beautiful to know of one
    such as your own ....i love this flow on
     
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    so much joy in a child's laughter...
    nice drop and welcome poet...keep dropin
    da vantage point...
    one love
    khasm
     
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