Black Poetry : Seems I'm Always Alone

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daya, May 18, 2003.

  1. daya

    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish someone was here, someone to take away the fear
    the fear I have for reailty the fear of just me cant thay see its not just me its all of this life we lead.
    we are cought by the Goverment, makeing us thinks its really us, but its not its the life and its calling are bluff,
    we think we know it all but really we are standing just three feet tall
    how can this be I'm not making it in this World I thought I could but this World had me took, I just wan't a house and a home
    is that to much to ask for
    I wan't my children to have what I did not I wan't to give my self I what my mother could not
    I wan't a husband clean and pure I wan't heaven at my front door
    is that to much to ask
    I need this last request I need my life to be bleesed
     
  2. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are bless my dear...you are blessed. And I thank you for blessing us with this verse.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    unto u a blessing be
    from the love i see
    ya scribe speaks so clear
    ur blessed my dear
     
  4. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REPLY BACK PLZ

    blessed is adequte,
    but u r much more.
    u fly with wings,
    which gives u power to soar.
    it isn't 2 much 2 ask,
    but life c's it that way.
    what ever u ask for,
    the world sends u the opposite of what u say.
    but keep on lookin up,
    cuz it's bound to get better.
    God's with u,
    he'll c u thru the rough weather..............(give me feedback on this):toast:
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful scribe...
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice...in a perfect world baby...nice
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look in the mirror and you'll see
    The future is at hand
    nice scribe
     
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