Black Poetry : Seeking my best Friend

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Seeking and searching
    for this friend one who
    knowz of qualities within
    what i want can't be pretend
    she must be one of a kind
    a friend to rock my mind
    she maybe somewhat hard
    to find and covered let her
    shine
    she will know my thoughts
    before i speak
    she must be strong when i'm
    weak
    she have to pose a rose
    when i'm cold
    and comfort me when i'm down
    replace wit smile if i frown
    she will listen when i talk
    and be my feet if i can't walk
    she will be of love kind heart
    she will feel mine from da start
    she must be understanding
    soft sweet yet demanding
    she will share wit me her
    deepest thoughts
    share her wisdom & knowledge
    dat can't be bought
    what i seek of dis friend
    is to be to me like kin
    and forgive me when
    and if i sin
    and when it seem my time
    she will come forth and shine
    a friend who don't yell
    but hold me under a love spell
    when i feel am in a rope
    she will come bring me hope
    seeking a best friend
    a heart to caress within
    looking high and low
    are u out there as i flow
    seek one to trust
    without all da fuss and
    words of cuss and please
    no lust
    she have to be good and bad
    bring joy and never get mad
    she have to the friend i never
    had , yet i know ain't it sad
    i wanna be proud
    of what i found
    and feel her raptured sound
    she have to hold peace
    yet ready for war dig deep
    down to the core
    she must have this tranquility
    to love a message of heart
    from above and craddle me
    like a dove wit many many hugs
    she will pose a unique style
    and a meek soft tender smile
    a warm gentle touch and know
    to say thank u much but i know
    she hard to fine and maybe
    never mines but i seek
    i know one day we shall meet
    O' what a treat and feast it
    will be when my best friend
    join me , can it be u ?
    will u be true ?
    can i love u ?
    tell me da truth :deal:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful scribe lay to the page in search of that one I so understand of a best friend A mate one you can trust. Who can love you no matter what, to hold you when you need that comfort, only she can give…stand when your weak…flow with you in love and Forever more. A heart of gold open and loving, …this was very vivid description and wonderful lay....wow

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff thankz sistah angel for the hit back
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...this is deep bro'..i likes it

    one.
     
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    This poem speaks seeking someone who has a good heart, and not only loves her mate, but truly likes him through fair weather(hey, that's easy), as well as through the storm(and they will come, sometimes without warning). And perhaps, she has already shown you this? Many sides to a relationship, many shades to a person and seasons of love. I really liked the way this was laid out, romantic love can wane, that's where friendship has to step in.
     
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    hey Mr.D...............man it's the best way to seek a friend and what she pose
    thankz brutha

    yes so true watz ur on point there are so many ways and reasons
    thank u sistah for the hit
     
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    If you could
    would you hold
    me under the moonlight
    Realize I broke the mold
    when God made me, but
    still think that I'm all right
    Anticipate those moods
    that appear in plain sight?
    If you can
    will you be the man
    that's doesn't fear what I see
    even when I predict
    a painful tragedy
    who doesn't ridicule my mistakes
    And just let my sarcasm be?
    Should you appreciate
    how wonderfully I can create
    a rhapsody of me, into
    a totality of we
    Being so, so into you
    what makes you tick?
    What a love so deep can do,
    that started as a friendship
    not clear out of the blue

    Just felt the urge to flow with it.....
     
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    awesome warm hit
    make u wanna say ummmmmm!!
    and if u could caress
    da mental and keep
    it safe in a place
    of heart and let the
    ripple cascade slow
    in the comfort of two
    if u could hold my
    hand as a love & friend
    and if u can allow me to
    be me within self without
    blame or shame for that
    moment da mind swoosh
    as the heart beats fast
    and let the seeking end
    and come to pass to a
    two of friendz like kin
    under the cherry moon
    glow of rapture
    thankz for the sweet heartfelt drop sistah watz
     
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    awww, now that's exactly what I want too, brotha $$RICH$$. You laid this out so beautifully, a pretty picture.
     
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    sho nuff gempis dis what we want and need to feel good and do good
    thankz my sweet
     
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