Black Poetry : SEEING YOU TODAY (IT'S BEEN A LONG TIME)

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  1. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TODAY I SAW YOU,
    FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE FOREVER
    OH MY GOD, YOU ARE STILL, SO DAM# BEAUTIFUL, TO ME

    I COULD BARELY LOOK AT YOU,
    WITHOUT YOU KNOWING THE TRUTH
    OF HOW MUCH I WANTED YOU,
    TO JUST COME AND STAND NEXT TO ME

    I COULD FEEL MY LOVE COMING DOWN
    AS YOU WALKED TOWARDS ME
    INTENSELY, LOOKING STRAIGHT AT ME,
    REACHING OUT FOR ME TO EMBRACE YOU

    AND I DID, EMBRACED YOU, WILLINGLY, ALMOST DESPERATELY
    BECAUSE I NEEDED YOU TO HOLD ME,
    JUST AS YOU, NEEDED ME TO ASSURE YOU,

    YES, I STILL LOVE YOU

    I CAN FEEL MY HEART BEATING OUTSIDE MY BODY, AS YOU PULLED ME CLOSER TO YOUR HEARTBEAT

    I, KNOW,
    I SHOULD LET GO OF YOU
    BUT I CAN'T,
    BECAUSE YOU WON'T,
    AND TO BE HONEST WITH YOU,
    I DON'T WANT TO,
    BUT I MUST,
    BECAUSE NOW I WANT TO KISS YOU AND TASTE ALL THAT I'VE BEEN MISSING FROM YOU

    YOU'RE STILL EMBRACING ME, AND IT SEEMS LIKE WE'VE BEEN HOLDING ON FOREVER, WE JUST CAN'T SEEM TO LET GO
    I CAN'T EVEN FEEL MY OWN BODY ANYMORE,
    FOR FEELING YOURS,
    I, AM, SO IN TO YOU,
    TO THE POINT THAT I CAN ONLY FEEL OUR SOULS
    INTERTWINING AS ONE, EXPLORING THE TRUTH

    AS YOUR BREATH REST UPON MY NECK MAKING ME WEAK
    MY BREASTS, PRESSES AGAINST YOUR CHEST SEEKING YOUR HEAT
    OOH
    I GOT TO STEP AWAY, BUT I WANT TO STAY,
    BUT YOU HOLD ON TIGHTER
    WHISPERING,
    PLEASE DON'T LET GO,
    SO I DON'T, BUT I MUST PRAY

    BECAUSE I NEED TO ASK MY GOD, WHAT TO DO,
    BECAUSE I WANT, SO BAD TO BE WITH YOU
    PLEASE STOP LOOKING AT ME THAT WAY, YOU ARE KILLING ME
    SOFTLY
    RIGHT NOW I, AM, WIDE OPEN TO YOU,
    MY LOVE IS FLOWING DOWN WITH AGGRESSION,
    BETWEEN MY LEGS, FOR YOU

    ALL OF ME IS WAITING FOR YOU
    CAN YOU SMELL THE SCENT OF ME?
    BECAUSE I, AM, SOAK AND WET, FOR YOU
    AND YOU HAVEN'T EVEN KISS ME YET

    I CAN'T SPEAK, YOU'RE TAKING MY BREATH AWAY,
    I, AM, SO DEEP INTO YOU, THAT ALL I CAN DO IS MOAN

    IF I SHOULD DIE, RIGHT NOW IN YOUR ARM
    THAT WOULD BE OK
    BECAUSE I HAVE FOUND ALL THE HEAVEN I NEED IN YOUR EMBRACE

    KISS ME NOW, AND REMIND ME THAT IT'S NEVER TO LATE, TO BEGIN AGAIN


    © Copyright 2004 by FINDLOVEINEME
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew...that yearning for something that you know isn't good for you, but has been good to you. You described this feeling so well. I was taken in, from start to finish. Yet another masterful flow.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa well felt scribe here u really came out wit dis one
     
  4. poetic_diva

    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dag it, I loved this. Ohmy this reminds me of a poem a once written. Simiply beautiful. :heart: :heart: :heart: :crying: :love: :love: :love: :spin: :spin: :fairy: ;) ;) ;) :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :grin: :grin: :spinstar: :spinstar: :wink: :wink: :toast:

    Much love Poetic_Diva

    "I can do all things through Christ, which strenghtens me" Philip 4:13
     
  5. Eric Mitchell

    Eric Mitchell Active Member MEMBER

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    This piece is drunk with passion. Beautifully done.
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    Oh Sister! You have
    captured that moment
    all so well!

    Brilliant!!! Loving it!!!!
     
  7. MrBlak

    MrBlak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You write poetry brilliantly. I dont normally like this type of poem becuase I cannot relate but you have once again done such a good job, that I enjoyed reading this. You are very versatile. I enjoy your dark poems, now I see your nicer poems are great as well.

    Keep writting!!

    MrBlak
     
  8. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so beautiful:):):): Sweet reunions. i like they way you flowed wit this
     
  9. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a truly personal piece for me, Thank You all for excepting it, with open arms.
     
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