Black Poetry : Seeing Real

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Nov 15, 2009.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seeing Real

    Lyrics are vexed crap that become complex in rap and love
    Talk then the sex overlap a honey with money keeps me a thug
    Need to add notes to your bad quotes your tad don’t promote
    Good rhymes even with hood lines you couldn’t be street soaked
    Your brain too small you’ll take a lame fall after you’re jacked
    And slapped whack, “all right hand over the bling and the crack”
    I’m a beast with vapors while you just a piece of paper for the trashcan
    Got no cash man, my stats trimmed like a hat brim while you a fat dim
    Rapper with a slim chapter and it ain’t HIP HOP take off them tims
    My art raw like a sharp saw if you act a clown you get smacked down
    I’m wrestling and testing the arena like John Cena I attack and astound
    With curved blades and words that’ll persuade you to do wrong so take
    Your crew home because I slew domes like guillitines man you fake
    You belong on a list of faggots while I piss on maggots you don’t have
    A chance slick I’ll grab and romance your chick while you search for vocab
    I have service rendered while you nervous and tender like a cartoon bet
    You fart in the room through your fruit of the loom an absolute goon wet
    With not skills, rhymes on romantic grounds like organic compounds fertilize,
    Hurdle wise and grow fruits and throw brutes on lock down like Burl Ives
    This is frosty the snow man its costly in no man’s land, hussle as a survivor
    And use muscle fiber plus tussle with drivers Taxi Cabs too expensive subscribers
    At the money in magazines while my dew rag be clean and starched
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hip hop drop at it's best........u doing it bad .....another awesome drop bruh!
     
  3. Brother Hussain

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    Nice drop.... i'm impressed by your pieces man but one thing I wouldn't glorify is being a thug...
     
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    I like I like!
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the peeps especialy the responses on this one
     
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