Black Poetry : SEEING CHANGE CHANGE

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  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we all live in this little world
    and just when we think we have everything figured out
    something happens that changes everything
    and once again we are lost and condemed to think
    that nothing will ever stay the same
    bcuz in this world everything changes
    and the sad part is
    that sooner or later
    we too will change
    but we know not when that change will arrive
    although we claim that we do
    and that is the reason why love is blind to us
    bcuz we focus so much on the pain that we endure
    that we never stop to be grateful
    to the joy we have
    you see blindness is permanet
    but it can be temporary if you see with your mind
    and at the same time open your heart
    so that you can mentally see
    that everything changes
    and hopefully change for the better
    but then again change is only temporary too
    so if everything is temporary
    then the only permanent thing has to be blindness
    bcuz no one can see what will stay the same..........or can they?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt change always come
    indeed we all change
    things change
    and time change
    nothing never stay the same
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one thing time never stands still...
    change and change as you grow...
    nicely posed... :angel1:
     
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    ooo i love the way you wrote this:)
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice and thought provoking...Especially that last line.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed change will come sooner or later......but tha ? is will it be for tha better or worser.....nobody knows.......and like you said we are all blind......tyte scribe....it was beyond truth........it was tha truff....flow on
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVE IT!!

    this is so true, u just made me think of so much in an amount of like 45 seconds. this is hot!!
     
  8. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the love and to all those who read poems on hte sight all my love goes to ya'll cuz ya'll taught me my rhymes and all............
     
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    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep, indeed... very insightful piece... change, all and all, is good in my opinion; for change in most cases is growth
     
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