Black Poetry : SEEDZ OF REVOLUTION

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  1. Poeticvibez

    Poeticvibez Member MEMBER

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    Silencing the rumble inside of me
    Gradually it begins to intensify
    Line after line I write
    Striking white over and over again with my black ink pen
    Is this how the Panthers felt in Oakland
    Is this how Malcolm felt in Brooklyn
    Is this how I Had A Dream felt when spit by King
    The smell of Exhaustion is in the air
    And Im ready to sit in the front of the bus today
    Im ready to throw my fist in the air today
    Im ready to put a forearm up in the air and say you can not kill the seeds of Revolution
    ******** distribution will no longer poison the earth we grow in
    And with teeth showing i will open the doors of the white house and go in
    Knowing that there are others like me
    behind me
    With the same fire flowing
    And the smell is strong almost potent
    I can smell it in the air
    And you back there in the fifth pew
    Im hoping the spirit in these words hit you
    Til U shaking in spasmatic glee
    I am speaking about someone who can make the asmathic breath
    But thats not me
    I follow he and he’s looking for you
    So are you willing join his army
    Because revolution with out a vision is a pointless mission
    and if in fact you do persue that fools move then you one of those that were destind to lose
    I bring word in the spoken form
    So that before the end all have been warned
    That this heat is not really Global warming
    And you fools can go on performing
    But when theres no one there to give you an encore then
    You will see that your Words can feed those so dearly in need
    That their soon drunk off the learning thats been yearning to be relaeased
    My brothers and sistas And Ill even understand if you prefer NI**AS and BI***ES
    Its about time that your words did more then just ryhme
    Speak because the words need to be released
    Do you think if I didnt have an over flow of words that you would be hearing this peice
    Please for you if not for me
    Stop because we’re killing the worlds that our kids will soon see
    It moved me so I hope it moves you to
    And the day that you awake and your not confused
    Tell someone cause mabey your words will move to
    The seedz of Revolution
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to destee.com

    Thanks for sharing

    Most of all welcome to whats called the poetic hole in the wall. I see your pen keep the ink flowing......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the seed is planted
    welcome within the house / poetic playground
    this was mad tyte keep flowing / sharing
     
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    Say it loud so they all can hear.

    Powerful piece.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Knowing that you mean to make a difference and that your brothers and sisters mean the same and have your back, now that's a revolution. Powerful drop brotha.
     
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    Poeticvibez Member MEMBER

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    Thanx

    Seeds of Revolution Seeds of change all the same as long as my words can reach out and touch someone that will tell another who will probally be the next Huey Newton without the sad ending.
     
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