Quiet Poetry Lounge : See ya thought ya knew me….

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 31, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok fam when y alisten to blues and ya fam then got on ya nerves this is the results....


    See ya thought ya knew me….
    But ya don’t how can ya….
    The flame is lite….
    And I am taken whats mine….
    I aint shame….no lame game…
    But its time ya know……
    See its time to get raw….
    must change my colors….
    ummmm thought you knew
    I am the real deal….
    Pride in my walk…..
    And love in my heart…
    Aint got time for games…
    Tryin to be my friend….
    And sneakin behind my back…
    I got the words about to lay the twist….
    Let ya feel my heat….
    Game over……
    You can brag then cry I wouldn’t care….
    But ya thought I was naïve ……..
    Well see I got my own…
    Now mind ya own…
    For ya get lost in my twist……..
    …I flowin at my pace….
    Get out my face….
    See ya thought you knew me….
    But ya don’t…
    I aint no joke….
    I make ya choke….with words…
    Never layin a hand….
    No time for the game…….
    Yes I am pissed off…
    I don’t know if it’s a poem…
    But I tell ya family ……
    One day and today was the day….
    I blew my steam
    And released my heat and laid my flow…
    TO BE CONTINUED
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hear ya lettin off the steam...no question...got to do it sometimes...continue...
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....

    c'mere, baby. Ok everybody. Let's give her a big :grouphug: :D
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel ya blow it off and smile
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin'it souldeep

    paper and pen can simmer the steam.

    writeaboutit... it helps
    Coco :heart:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam....
    yea i smile now brother $$RICH$$
    and ty money.....
    cocobutterskyn and watzinaname
    indeed blowin the steam....exhale got my smile back
    Peace Yall
     
  7. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very inspirational

    it is to my heart... tells me that i should have known how to go about things in past relationships even if it delt with family yave touched me
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da love little sis.....
    family can be a mess
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do agree..family can be a mess...family can sometimes be your worse enermy. I felt every word you did/didnt say. And as we all know...better out than in...
     
  10. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ouch!!!! That was tyte beauty.
     
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