Khasm13 : see with your own 2 eyes...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    everybody is not in this
    to win this
    some people can't handle
    their own business
    but still want to drill you
    like a dentist
    some people look at life
    as a death sentence
    walking around like the living dead
    with unhealthy thoughts
    floating around in their head
    some people have no original thoughts
    and follow lowly leveled leaders
    for naught
    some people live life
    hoping that they never get caught
    from all the damage that they wrought
    some people think that eveything and everybody
    can be bought like dea sea salt
    some people are self taught
    and can give a f**k about what is considered civilized
    some people have lies written all over their face
    and these are magnified by thier eyes
    some people live in a fairy tale land
    where everything is defined
    and everything contained in it they understand
    some people never know the meaning
    of the word i can
    cause the world has beaten them down so
    some people use others like a pro
    usually the children of sorry souls
    that let their seed blow
    in the wind
    now the question is
    when will you begin
    to see this
    with your own 2 eyes?

    and not telivised lies...
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this cannot help but be seen Khas....
    we've all really got stop
    combing our minds so much
    our thoughts need to lock...

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as my heart cry
    i see the things
    that i don't understand
    like hurt and pain
    seen as a game
    fighting in a corner
    no room to turn
    walking around like zombie
    building walls
    trapping the mind
    adults screwd up
    leaving the young blood
    with no defenders
    they get draw in
    the hurt and pain game
    of the insane
    as my heart cry
    seeing it with
    my 2 eyes

    Peace
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As we move forward sharing this vision
    Mine eyes are your eyes
    Committed to a cause-

    Very Nice, Khasm13
     
  5. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    play--thanks for da words gurl....

    blue--"walking around like zombie
    building walls
    trapping the mind"-- i couldn't agree more...

    four score and two seconds ago
    i went to da recka stowe
    and got clocked and jocked by the manager
    cause i looked like someone who robbed them before...

    now i can take that
    cause he saw this with his own 2 eyes
    but still we shouldn't generalize
    cause negativity can control cancerous lives

    and thanks 1poet...you replied while i was replying :)
    peace
    khasm
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l'm looking...
    don't like what l'm seeing
    but seeing the light through this hella true/tyte piece.....

    nfinite,,
    jh.
     
  7. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    khasm...profound commentary with deep *** roots in the realism of life!!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm I'm feelin this cuz it's hard to deal with the number of effed up people out there. Overwhelming sometimes. I tune them out for the most part, and your poem got me to wondering for a minute if I'm denying reality in doing so. I decided no. The glass is half full for me, so I chose to see light.

    Lovin your flow.
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with everyone else... im loving this man!!
     
  10. angelicsage

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    hearing your message, seeing with my own 2 eyes.

    Peace,
    Angelic
     
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