Black Poetry : See What I See

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Oct 11, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im rampid when I express my mind
    Vividly creative others stuck on nine/
    Imaginative yet craftsmanship is so superb
    Like white gurls in hoodies sometimes perturbed/
    I aint racist but aint no projects in the suburbs
    No liquor stores on every corner arabs got some nerve/
    Some flirt with death like this they deserve
    Yall klans in white hoodies coffins I reserve/
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    My brothers killing each other on corners
    End up on milk cartons with candle light mouroners/
    Cops pluck us one by one like 9/11 foriegners
    I got some more buckshots for those looking to coroners/
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    See my landscape filled with death and rapists
    Murder charges and cook county cases/
    Orange throwdowns describe there faces
    Its something that burns harder than mase and....
    Im not a preacher but no terms or means
    I just hope the world takes a different direction in HEAVEN I mean/

    See What I See
     
  2. Omowale Jabali

    Omowale Jabali The Cosmic Journeyman PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nice drop!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up !!!
    had me dancing to da tune up high
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I see what u see.
    Flow on Tantrum.