Black Poetry : See today i woke up...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see today i woke up
    my dream is never gonna come true..
    see i know this now...
    what i called love
    is not for me....
    and the one i thought never did...
    just a game...
    to see how far i would go...
    i dont mean nothing to him...
    for he dont have time....
    i shared my heart...
    now he shares with another...
    but claim he loves me....
    holded my head down in shame...
    coz i do love him....
    but he can never return the same...
    i would of been there for you...
    but you dont see the same...
    i cry for my hopes have die
    just because of you...
    my pen dont float no more
    my blood turned blue...
    my heart in pieces
    now i must let it go
    hope u find what you need
    because i wasnt the one...
    you loved...my dream have broken now
    i am full of night mares
    all thanks to you...
    never will i give another chance
    of this thing called love
    for you took the last of me
    that i could give.....

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright 2003
     
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    heart felt sorrow.....but I'm sure that you didn't mean that you would try no more... (for Love) Its out there mama, its out there!!! and I'm sure you will find it....Listen, as a true friend of yours, I'm telling you that you can not make others pay for a mistake that you made with one (by giving him your heart). Keep GOD first in your life and you shall truly be blessed......
     
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    God is in my heart first...
    but love for me is none...
    i love myself first....
    and thats way i just let go
     
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    why keep going for a dream thats not meant to be...
    i was born alone and i will die alone.....
    love for me is not on this earth its all false....
    so i love thy self....
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautifully written.... I have been through this alot.... but remember always stay true to yourself....
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed i alway have....love thy self is the best i can offer nothing more or less....thank you for reading...Da1whoownslife
     
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    i hope you'll give "love" another try
    trust me it isn't over yet...one sista to the next...j.
     
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    maybe not....thanks for the read..Jazz4u
    my love is above...
    and he looks for me....
    it will come
    just hope i know when it do...
     
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    dont hold your head down in shame. falling for false love is nothing to be ashamed of. its human nature. feelin this one. sounds like my first "so called love". at least now u know what love aint so there's no mistakin' what love is. you feel me? i glad to see that you do know that GOD IS LOVE. and he will never leave you nor forsake u like your last false lover. as long as you have God in your life your life is always full of love. so u do have love. life goes on sistah.

    ;) ;) ;) ;)
     
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    I feel ya on this angel (snaps)..... SSSSSSSSNAP outta it girl!
    whatever... whoever... not worth too much time.....learn ya lesson and move ON!!....... OOH if I coulda saved some a my tears (back to now).. you express your soul so beautifully..... don't stop.

    SUN:kiss:ed
     
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