Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Jan 19, 2002.
from da big apple to da windy city
dis red man ain't smiling coz hell is on my trail too
man i feel ya here ............but brighter dayz ahead!
I be color blind......so I can't see no Yellow Man.... (just kiddin')
Thank you for sharing this piece!
I am loving this for more than your brilliant ability to flo the real.
It's the clever &(sometimes even cute)way you express yourself. I happen to think the Yellow Guy sets it off. I'm really diggin this T. B.
Poetically Turn'd Out!
maybe i should have said look at the yellow face to your left
sherykah - thanks for the love i think you may think yellow guy is me because i'm light skinned but i'm not i'm brown skinned and yellow guy is the mad face icon i always use on my thread. but everybody got it hard as well as the honey brown honeys, sorry for not making clear who yellow guy was
$$RICH$$ - yes i was checking mr. redman out - feeling the love
N2 - you don't see color but i see your yellow guy laughing
Coco - you cheated so you have to get a rain check -- um i said that smiling of course and you know i don't smile unless you make me feel good
thanks people for your kind support
always in ya corner brutha wit da kindly love
of a true brutha ya street fighter in da windy city
just one of da badboyz!
Dawg I Str8 dug the flow of this peice!!! & the way you ended it was just Sick!
Dawg your mental is like that!!!!
This is a hella tight piece of street creativity mos' def!!!!
Keep representin' from "da streets" bro!!!!
brother, now that was clever. and the piece was "straight truth" sun!!! keep cracking craniums blakman.
you guys make me feel good
$$RICH$$ - we been down since afro
need i say more peace dun
REASON - glad you like the ending
and saw where i was taking this, also
you always compliment me on the flow
and i appreciate your discerned eye
because yes there is a flow the my stuff
GQ - yo thanks for support
ditto the message to $$RICH$$ peace man
Blakverb - you improvise a like more than me but i tried man BITS
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