Black Poetry : See smooth and that behooves my eyesight when I try write

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See smooth and that behooves my eyesight when I try write
    Bitter situations stay under consideration makes decisions tight
    Have unique will power like wheat and flour cook bread
    And shook heads then do handshakes while pancakes are fed
    Crews stand like Sudan throw a spear and flow so clear
    In Africa, while we deliver like the Nile River go sincere
    With waters deep waves slaughters weak cats so they fear
    Being in a cipher dimension is like hypertension, elevates
    Blood pressure devastates a thug’s pleasure it regulates
    And control the bold, as a rap commander got slam well
    Like Alexander Graham bell invented a telephone now the cell
    To take loads of criticism is like to make roads to wisdom
    It builds, pave imaginations, crave for explanation to the cataclysm
    Cats devastated buy FUBU, like being cultivated in Honolulu
    A bunch of pineapples wet like lime Snapple’s girl Donna is my boo true
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MADDRAPPER

    This piece is tight, bruh...dapz.

    "Cats devastated buy FUBU, like being cultivated in Honolulu"...da mentally blind. Funny but true.

    "Being in a cipher dimension is like hypertension, elevates"...If one only knew.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up MADD u on target tyte drop bruh !
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man can I get a cd or sumtin what's really good?:lol:
     
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    I particularly like these lines:
    And control the bold, as a rap commander got slam well
    Like Alexander Graham bell invented a telephone now the cell
    But, it's all good, you can flow for sure.
     
  6. MADDRAPPER

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    YALL MADE MY DAY FOR REAL THANKS FOR RESPONDING
     
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    wonderful poem Mad..you be making our day:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  8. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater thanks for trhe props for real
     
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