Black Poetry : See Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by fade, Oct 1, 2004.

  1. fade

    fade Member MEMBER

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    SEE ME

    U
    HEAR ME CUMING, U HEAR ME GROANING, U EVEN HEAR ME MOANING OUT YOUR NAME, BUT DO YOU SEE ME?
    U TOUCH ME HERE, U TOUCH ME THERE, SO ASK YOURSELF I’M I REALLY THERE?
    I CAN SEE U; I CAN FEEL U, SO WHY ON EARTH CAN U NOT SEE ME?
    I LOVE U,
    U HURT ME,
    I TOUCH U,
    U TEASE ME,
    IS THAT WHY IT’S SO HARD FOR YOU TO TRY IN SEE ME?
    ALL I WANT FOR YOU TO DO IS PUT A SMILE ON MY PRETTY FACE FOR GOODNESS SAKE, AND ALL IT WILL TAKE BABY IS FOR YOU TO SEE ME, SEE ME, ONE THOUSAND TIMES JUST SEE ME…………..​
    SEE ME​
     
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    Compassion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartfelt all over the page~


    :run: in a circle give that energy to someone who does.


    Awesome peice!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hi:fade,
    I'm stepping in to say, Welcome to the place where "home" warms the heart
    I read your piece and I like the way you stepped in...I would love to hear this piece in voice chatt over the mic.
    thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece and again welcome.
     
  4. Sumthinnew

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    Thats good much love shown from sumthinnew :)
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes it seems that no matter how hard hard we try, we are somehow not seen by the one who we want to see us the most. It's a painful feeling, and you expressed this well. Flow on.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey welcome again...very heartfelt scribe flow on....release nice work
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome fade happy to feel the bliss of ya pen
    this was tyte
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If they don't, their loss.

    Sometimes it's hard to close your eyes 2 the 1 U see but doesn't see U, but believe that once U open them again, someone else will be looking into them.

    Nice piece.