Black Poetry : See me, search me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by showfer, Jan 18, 2004.

  1. showfer

    showfer Member MEMBER

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    See my heart - Search my soul,
    Let me prove - You make me whole.
    Listen closely - Hear my cries,
    Look inside - See past my eyes.

    You're here with me - So be prepared
    To hold me closely - I'm broke and scared.
    Be my shelter - Be my guide,
    Be the shadow - By my side.

    Please tell just me - You understand,
    You hold my heart - When you hold my hand.
    I want you to show me - I want to see through,
    I want to see - Inside of you.

    I need your arms - To hold me tight,
    Through endless days - And wreckless nights.
    Inside of me - My heart is gone,
    For the palm of your hand - Is its new home.

    You cleared the skies - You cleared the rain,
    You dried the tears - And eased the pain.
    Take my heart - Take it all,
    Let the limits - Catch my fall.

    God put us together - He made you mine,
    He made our hearts - To intertwine.
    The world turned down - What my heart has said,
    And played with thoughts - Inside my head.

    But I know this is love - Like I never knew,
    I could lose the world - If I have you.
     
  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...

    i love how u laid this. i think its beautiful and quite moving. love it.
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, this is such a pretty, pretty flow. welcome, showfer, this is great
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet description of a loving flow...keep writing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Very nice scribe here ....tyte keep flowin
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this flow
    it laid all the
    way down...
    nice drop
     
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