Black Poetry : Seductive Temptress

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by amin, Sep 11, 2005.

  1. amin

    amin Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 11, 2005
    Messages:
    20
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    Born with beauty of Cleopatra
    she never needed to develop any skills
    to catch her
    a man
    her beauty is truly skin deep
    but it is so difficulty for the men to see
    who she truly be
    She steps in the club
    her body draws her some much love
    the short skirt and the cleavage showing
    but she does not see this as hoeing
    she knows where ever mans imagination is going
    but she is not slowing down
    as she does not believe she is any man’s clown
    a female pimp
    she wants a man who can give her the finer things in life
    like lobster and shrimp
    it does not matter if he is a mobster or not
    so long as he’s money long
    she does not see anything wrong
    in pursuing a man who lifestyle is wrong
    it is not his but her life she is trying to prolong
    all the men that evening desire her
    so they buy her drinks to show they admire her
    their pockets are not deep
    but the thought of her keeps
    them believing
    all this money spent on her
    despite the deceiving
    will count
    refusing to listen to the doubt
    believing their game will take
    it’s cause
    every man she goes past will pause
    as she flaunts it
    knowing the more men who see it
    will want it
    she know they see her as a possession
    she uses their jealousy as her weapon
    she teases them using the carrot not the stick
    yet this pleases them
    you have to admire her strategy
    I mean the way she uses her anatomy
    it is a clever trap to me
    she happens to be the queen bee
    to her group of friends
    it is like her they pretend
    to be like
    sad because she cant see right
    she is heartless female
    her plan is to make the male her slave
    under her spell they fall
    not realising she’s not innocence
    like Cinderella at the ball
    so easy for her to seduce
    this was abuse of men
    a man tries to seduce her
    her cold stare turns him to stone like Medusa
    she turns the tables
    and like Aesope tell her own fable
    her seduction effortless
    getting the man to buy her champagne
    leaving him penniless
    I ask myself why did God decide to produce her
    was it to reduce men
    who abuse women
    to nothing
    I don’t know
    all I know is her ways were really something
    playing us at our own game
    she knows the programme
    she proceeds to the dance to a slow jam
    low down she goes
    back up she comes
    it is her bumper every man wants to grind
    lost by her wind
    they do not know she is playing with their mind
    each man who asks her to dance
    is turned away
    hence more looks come her way
    she is the centre of attention
    she is the head teacher
    they are the pupils in detention
    she has control
    she knows as she strolls and rolls out
    in the Rolls Royce
    going home with the man of her choice
    her poise
    is still on the mind of the men
    she left behind
    don’t worry next week she will be back to find
    the man with the right symptoms
    to be him her next victim
     
  2. amin

    amin Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 11, 2005
    Messages:
    20
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    Flip side male side.

    He is addicted to sex
    the nymphomaniac
    who puts on act
    to get what he wants
    he will do anything thing for that
    response
    which indicates will you go home with me tonight?
    you see this is his way of life
    he seeks meaning in sex
    he does not find it demeaning when his next
    conquest falls in love with him
    because it is all fun to him
    he lacks self-control
    so he patrols the club like a robber
    looking for that woman who will give it to him without a rubber
    he is not trying to be her lover
    he just wants to ****
    in his mind tonight he hopes he has that luck
    to find a woman to give him all the he wants
    he clocks a the daunted woman in the corner
    and tells you are to beautiful to be in the corner
    he friends try to warn her
    but she doesn’t listen
    her mind is on hugging and kissing
    but his is more graphic than that
    he takes her home and she has a panic attack
    at his forthrightness she did not know he would be like this
    this time she thought it would be different
    believing it is to late to play innocent
    she does the deed and closes her mind as he proceeds
    she now realises
    his wish was to sow his seed
    so he is not slow to proceed
    in approaching women
    he promises them the world
    but delivers little
    however this is something he would never admit to
    so she gave into in to him
    as he prayed on her insecurities
    that she had throughout her puberty
    she then closed her mind and said this is nothing new to me
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Each type of temptress, adept at their craft, will ultimately get what they deserve, each other. Very well thought out scribes that held my attention, and the way you flipped the scrpt, and showed the male side, that was unexpected, and well done. Welcome to Destee poet, hope to read more from you.
     
  4. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 8, 2005
    Messages:
    577
    Likes Received:
    5
    Ratings:
    +7
    I like the flipping of the scripts also, poet. Both poems were great!
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    welcome amin to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to thr family of peace and respect
    welcome to the house of given love , sharing
    welcome within i enjoyed both scribes well done
    look to read more of you soon as you show love
    as love is given welcome ...................................
     
  6. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 19, 2004
    Messages:
    424
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    within N.Y. State of Mind
    Ratings:
    +4
    Both poems were so descriptive...You painted the pictures so vividly with yo words. Indeed, 2 great poems!
     
  7. amin

    amin Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 11, 2005
    Messages:
    20
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    Thanks @all for your comments they are much appreciated, I have just got back in to the flow of poetry once again and am enjoying it there is some great stuff on the board. I look forward to posting more work myself and read that of fellow poets.

    Peace
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    poetry never stray too long happy to feel ya pen
    and enjoy your artist creation .....most welcome
     
  9. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 30, 2005
    Messages:
    428
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Painter
    Location:
    In Tha Bottom! Deeeep South
    Ratings:
    +7
    Welcome and I'm definitely looking forward to tasting more of your flow!
     
  10. amin

    amin Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Sep 11, 2005
    Messages:
    20
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    The respect is much appreciated thanks Emissary and co. I am looking around on the board and the quality of poetry is of a high standard. Keep up the good work all :number1:
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - Seductive Temptress
  1. MizEducated
    Replies:
    4
    Views:
    25,114
  2. Metree
    Replies:
    9
    Views:
    706
  3. GQ
    Replies:
    5
    Views:
    600
  4. PlayWitItPimp05
    Replies:
    5
    Views:
    641
  5. 1poetsought
    Replies:
    9
    Views:
    580