Black Poetry : SEDUCTION of REFLECTION

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Why have your words seduce me
    into a mental stare of wonderment
    deceited by my own reflection
    from the beauty of compassion

    A mirror present to examine da face
    from the seduction taken place
    through da common pleasure & sorrow
    within da excursion of life

    I listen intently as u filled my lungs
    as i lay still in da hazy room consumed me
    i lost myself in da perfection of da moment
    hearing my heartbeat in indingo melodies

    On every whisper from da mental spoke
    clear enough for my ears to capture
    still seduced by the rapture of ya maze
    i cast my cares unto you deeply

    Shed light on da false tales da story live
    crashing the image discovering truth
    as da answers lay in da beauty of blessings
    I now cling to my soul for this ride

    I'm no longer hidden in da fade
    ending any illusional view "that i am"
    realization glist while i'm seductively taken
    deeper and more abondedly unto ya will

    eyes seduce me to my nudity
    like a fallin ship in da grand body of tears
    for it's my love dat calls unto da spirit
    as da mind clash and da heart feels warmth

    Naked i stand there willingly to give all i have
    for just a few moment of tyme
    each day grows into the next until morrow
    ya cascading eyes beckon me beyond hope

    Da silken fingertips mentally envision da touch
    as i weave myself pass da burning desires
    somehow yet i continue to fall under da spell
    i am now house in da temple of ya love

    THis when i notice my innocence slipping way
    known to my existance of love , i'm being seduce
    on the image seen before me as it invade my heart
    it's only a reflection of my mental that's seductive.
     
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    it's only a reflection of my mental that's seductive.:teach:
     
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    Very Nice!

    Seduction of the finest.

    Mental reflection of innocence lost.

    Yes. For innocence has a season and then...

    On to other things. LOL
     
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    Thankz family for the visit inside da world of mental seductive reflection !
    Hodee , so'ja , sweet apple*pie
     
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    This was a very passionate read. Great for the Mind to play with.
     
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    yes thank you sister FindLoveinmeBack the mind can roam the thoughts within
    thankz for the visit and love here .
     
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    "Shed light on da false tales da story live
    crashing the image discovering truth
    as da answers lay in da beauty of blessings
    I now cling to my soul for this ride" Enjoyed this particular line

    Very powerful words that move the soul.

    Enjoyed this seduction of reflection
    Very good read for the mind body and soul
    thanks rich!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Big thankz Rashad it take one places unknow ....
     
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