Black Poetry : Seducing My Man

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  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seducing My Man
    As I stand silhouetted against the bathroom door
    Hazy golden light bouncing off my
    Mocha brown skin, chestnut hair and peach lingerie
    I saunter towards your seated figure
    Reveling in the feel of cool silk against molten flesh
    The mid-thigh peaches and cream nightie rides my curves
    I can tell by the glow in your eyes that I mesmerize
    "Phenomenal Woman" comes to mind
    As the bulge in your pants rises and defines
    Standing in front of you I place one high heeled nylon clad leg by your thigh
    Your nose inches closer catching my womanly scent
    Your tongue is playing tricks on already sensitive skin
    You nip at my thigh highs pulling them down with your teeth
    I back away giving you the show I came to bring
    Dancing slowly sensuously, hips swaying, hands in my hair
    Maple syrup colored eyes saying, 'this here got your name on it'
    Ever so slowly I let one shoulder drop, all that's between
    Your gaze and my flesh is a measly little clasp
    I finger it then release it, silk flutters to the floor in a whispering heap
    Smooth brown skin clad only in two skimpy pieces of black lace
    You run to my side but...this is my show, I set the pace...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa u can seduce me .........this was sensually hot
     
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    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :darts: this piece is definitely on point! Right on!

    April
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    still feeling the fire from this poetic blaze
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciated all the love brother Rich, you are one of my greatest inspirations to write.

    And thanks for the read sister napturally
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome and i'm very flattered.....
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (((taking notes))))..
    ohh.. yea my bad.
    I was paying attention
    ...
    nice scribe!:oops:
     
  8. lilcutie

    lilcutie Active Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] girl. Looks like i'ma have 2 keep my man away from u. go 'head.
    That was HOT, SMOKIN', BLAZIN'.
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all the love, I love my destee family.
     
  10. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey hey hey...

    That's right Ms. Chocolate Angel...seduce that Shiny Black Ebony Sexy Adonis. Do your duty, and slang that booty :lol: Don't hurt the precious man...QQ
    :hearts2:
    :picture:
     
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