Black Poetry : Secrets

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (Subtitled : Words in A Minor)

    As you
    rub me softly
    and stroke me
    and my curiosity
    Yet you teach me how to be
    reserved with intimacy
    as you touch me
    I can feel your soul
    running through me
    its as real as
    the grass under my feet
    I can feel your thoughts
    even when you don't speak
    You don't even have to look at me.
    a simple touch, a simple kiss,
    a strong lick of the neck
    keeps my body conscious
    and my mind erect
    trying to
    flow naturally
    yet you know so many things
    that you intimidate me.
    I try to use my instinct
    but it fails.
    You feel the need
    to teach me things
    properly
    without using me
    you want me to be
    your top-notch freak.
    You don't have to
    say this boo becausue
    I can hear your mind speak.
    Theoretically,
    you being aged 23
    why else would you want me?
    Me, being aged 16?
    Because I feel your need
    To teach me things
    just as much as I want to be taught
    as much as you make me
    yearn to know what makes you so completely
    irresistible-what makes you
    so attractive to me?
    This is a mystery
    wrapped in an enigma
    which has a history
    As if
    we were together in another lifetime
    As if one time
    I was yours and you were mines.
    This love affair is what
    you would label as divine
    Because this is truly one-of-a-kind.
    Am I blind?
    I was taught that "age aint nothing but a number"
    So why should I even stop to wonder
    Whether what I am doing
    is wrong or right
    I know all I need is one
    secretive, mysterious night.
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like I like so erotic and clear I felt as if I was in the situation with you thanks for putting this one on us
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte flow well felt that one night !
    flow on !
     
  4. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like, i like... I LIKE ya flow! :)... you painted a beautiful picture with your words... intimacy... hmmm... ain't nothing like it!


    peace
     
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