Quiet Poetry Lounge : SECRETS OF A CHILD

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Nine months we shared
    what only you and i
    could see
    felt pains between us as a
    we
    I gave u hiccups , in return i got
    heartburns
    felt your hunger my body yearn
    neither one of us minded, i guess we'll
    never learn
    you heard my whispers on each beat
    quietly as i talked to u
    felt my hands & my feet
    our little secret deeply we keep
    inside how so sweet
    we was together through good & bad
    the best thing a child ever had
    and when i departed just to grow
    it was like i lost my soul
    sometime i feel i'll never be whole
    our little secret
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    WOW!!!!

    Your

    Words Overwhelming We
    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:

    The WE.....in.....




    M.E.
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    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your writing is

    so diverse Bro Rich. Sometimes the poetry is heavy hitting and rich like mahogany or Black wood, othertimes like this piece it is light and peaceful. I thoroughly enjoy the diverse tapestry from which you draw your words!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you truetothecause when a mother and her unborn bond who knows
    each other better and pose deep dark secrets as one .....Thy child

    Thankz a million Phynxofkmt twistin the style and means up brings balance to the fold.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Bond Of a Mother and an Unborn Child
    Something Scientist can not Understand
    A Bond of a Lifetime
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    That is so true ......there is nothing on the face of the earth that can describe the
    unity of two soulful hearts bonding......From fetis to birth they will bond a security
    of love ,thank you sister PLATINUM
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It does seem magical, that time when a baby is inside the mother's womb. I felt that secret spark within your words, so well felt.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watz those are secret magical moments you know of and felt just brought back them feelings, Thank u dearly for feeling me here
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :couple:beautifull...





    wauw beautifull...




    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    Thank u Auroraflower i just wanted it to be felt and known by the eyes who can't see.
     
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