Black Poetry : Secretly

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Secretly
    I take your hand
    And we fly above
    With the love we have inside
    Secretly
    We share a flame
    That burns so bright
    Within the night
    To morning light
    Secretly
    I am your rose
    Secretly
    I am your black pearl
    Secretly
    I am the Queen
    of your heart
    But.....Secretly
    Above we fly
    In a hush
    Secretly
    The dying love
    Of me comes alive
    Secretly
    We fade in the back
    Where it is just us two
    In loves eye
    Is it possible
    As I
    Secretly take your hand
    And we confess
    The hearts truth
    Or will we forever be
    Secretly
    In love…….

    I don’t want to ripe us apart
    But I can’t be a secret
    For my love is to bold and strong
    And as I hold on
    It’s breaking my heart…
    For the love I have is profound
    But I wonder is it to strong for you
    For you to hide our love
    In the dark…..

    Secretly
    I pretend I am fine
    Secretly
    I hurt
    Secretly
    I am crying inside
    Secretly
    Confessions of the heart
    Pass between us two
    That is one
    But… Secretly
    Compassion is the word
    And hurting is the curse
    And the love flows
    Within so deep
    Free as the air
    Secretly
    That the depth of me
    Is dying
    And you don’t see
    Secretly
    We share
    Secretly
    We are
    And it is coloring me blind with pain
    To yell from the skies
    And flow in the heavens
    But….
    Secretly
    We stand
    In loves arms…
    Bold
    Strong
    Profound
    And real….is our love
    Secretly

    (C) 2004
    Da Letters
     
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    secretly
    from the measures
    a body of lovin pleasure
    secretly
    as we float wit the
    wind sweep of hope
    to a place unknown
    to linger and roam
    secretly
    inside the soul
    a true love of heart
    tappin softly in gentle
    cries as time seem to
    fly two in a deep zone
    a place love calls it's own
    secretly
    the passion flow
    whisper words of together
    in a glow as two master and
    share fulfill with tender care
    secretly ummmm secretly !!

    tyte drop here made me feel all the secret warmth from dis one
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Secretly
    Two share in a hush
    Above they float
    Secretly
    In that unknown place
    Loves hope
    So divine
    Secretly
    Two begins to roam
    In a world
    Thas only made for two
    and there we are
    becoming one
    Secretly
    The loves there
    A undying bond
    Secretly
    Tender care
    Hidden in the dark
    Secretly
    We are
    Secretly
    We share
    Secretly
    Finding the comfort zone
    To please
    Softly and gently
    Secretly
    The love is oh so…..
    Secretly

    Rich
    Secretly...thank you for the flow and the
    passion you laid within.... :heart:
     
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    ...this was beautiful
    but if the love is real
    he will shout it from the
    mountaintop...

    Love should never be hidden...
    and secrets are only beautiful
    in the beginning...

    A woman's love is a gift
    more precious than diamonds...
    if he can't feel that, he's a fool

    The emotion in this piece....
    leaps from the page...
    You crafted this with perfection
    and with a flame of passion that
    flowed from your quill...

    Feeling this...
    One luv, Sage
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, this was indeed beautiful. And I have to agree with sage, he will shout it out loud for everyone to hear if the love is true. If not, his loss. Emotively brought.
     
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    thru the travels of the pen...
    pains are released...
    i got all up into this piece...tyte joint...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    l dig this- l lived this- l like this...

    l think you outdid yourself Mz...

    jh.
     
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    Your secret' safe wit' me... ain't love grand!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the words my sister
    and for the flow...
    you hit it right on the nose
    it cant be real if the love is a
    secret..thanks for the
    love and support of my scribe
    Peace Angel
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QQ..all up in the piece huh? :lol:
    thank you for the warm love my brother
    happy you enjoyed
    Peace
    Angel
     
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