Black Poetry : Secretly Wantin You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladyafrika, Jul 7, 2005.

  1. ladyafrika

    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im on some ol' Alicia Keys ish
    like he dont know my name
    I gotta passion fa him
    but does he feel the same?
    Maybe I should stop chasin'
    If Im not wanted
    I should just move on right?
    WRONG.
    If you want sumthin' that bad
    you should try to hold on
    Its hard feelin' somebody
    that aint feelin you
    makes you think bout what you gon do
    Sometimes Im like forget it
    If he dont know now
    he'll neva get it
    but I need him in my lyfe
    like milk, he could do my body right
    got me so high on lyfe
    they call me lady kite
    but my fear of rejection
    got my tears on ejection
    Im headed in ya direction
    askin' to recieve ya affection.......
     
  2. ladyafrika

    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you feelin this one please add to my reputation!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    don't know why he can't see
    the sweet unique love of thee
    secretly wantin , have ya body
    huntin in a yearning burn yet
    taste a rejection tears run from
    seem ejection if he can't see
    come to me for that affection
    so i light up ya direction wit
    humble compassion

    don't stop chasin what u want go for it .....
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Name it claim it and recieve it. Nice piece.
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey never fear rejection. I've learned its always better to ask than to never know the truth of the matter by making assumptions. So get ya crunk juice on and go get em! The poem was laced though. Love your line,"but I need him in my lyfe
    like milk, he could do my body right!" You need to tell him just that sista!
    Nevertheless this be an all around the world Tight write.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am with you on that!!!!

    Nice scribe I enjoyed the read....
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this one had me hooked on the 1st line......... :sand:
     
  8. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was diggin it from the start, but was waitin on more at the end. Is there a continuation to this? Does he finally know?
     
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