Black Poetry : Secretly Admiring You From Afar

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Hiclass_female, Nov 12, 2003.

  1. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking at the way you walk
    listening to the way you talk
    you make me so hot, I wanna take my clothes off
    yet you're still not noticing me noticing you
    to the extent that I want you to
    if only you knew....
    I think Gatorade said it best "Is it in you?"
    because you're in me
    I feel that we are destine to be
    one of those couples on the Newly Wed Show
    you carrying me thru the doe'
    of our 2-story house
    playing cat and mouse
    with each other
    am I moving too fast for ya?
    LOL, let me slow it down
    we'll just take it round by round
    day by day
    I'll just wait to hear you say
    "I'm ready for you to be my lady."
     
  2. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've been here. I really like the way you put this. Keep them coming.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was posed nive..
    all the way down...
    flow on cuz i know this feeling...
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww, this was sweet!
    love the air of excitement
    and anticipation that flowed
    within this piece!
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What?
    What?
    What?
    This was str8 "HOT" Ohhhhhhhhh My. The line**
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    if only you knew....
    I think Gatorade said it best "Is it in you?"

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    ** Was just 2 Phat!
     
  6. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think every1 who reads this will agree wit me. This is sum gooooood ish.......ur speakin for alot of us, cuz we have been in dat stuation once or twice. :) Keep writtin mama!
     
  7. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a lot of woman waiting for that too------this is one son of a biscuit flow here........i'm feelin it, really feelin it....................(flow on)
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my goodness
    this brought on a smile
    very nice piece
    Peace
     
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