Black Poetry : Secret Tryst

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A hidden summon across the waves
    meant for only my eyes and mind
    Letting it be known that she cares to care
    Offering me a part in a propitious tryst

    A thousand smiles brought to bear by
    the anxiousness of her libidinal yearning
    She wants to mingle with my nature for pure
    and quiet affection; for it has been absent from
    her heart for so long—graciously, I accept her
    humble invite

    Time slowly moves toward the moment to secretly
    meet her in wait—the unknowing produces butterfly
    battles in the pit of her stomach as anxiety grows
    Anticipating the unspoken mysteries of me and my way
    Hoping with uncontrolled tensed might that I could be the one
    Still carefully guarded against the secrecy of my being

    Her poetical enigma charmingly enters her temporary loveless asylum
    The air, aromatized with the scent of love, suggests an instant vibe
    Smooth libations I bear surely will quell the uneasy of my anonymity

    A warm and sincere embrace sets the tone for the moments to come
    I take my place across from her to bask in my own visual of her personal mystique
    Our eyes meet several times in a starry gaze that personifies amazement
    It is time to share of our once private individual essences; without spoken words as yet
    We accept that karma of the minds is something truly spiritual to believe in

    As the day ages into darkness, idle banter subsides as actions grow bolder
    Once at a distance, the hunger for a closer feel consumes us both
    The lovely libations, once meant to soothe fears, animates pheromones
    Pent up aphrodisiacal passions to taste of one another can no longer be contained

    A delicate but brief kiss on the lips ignites the flames of our hearts afire
    I am compelled by her asking of me to recite a passage, any passage
    Silently I pause to write in my mind, a short ode that captures the night and her
    As I narrate my creation, she appears enamored and pleased and reciprocates
    with a piece so full of need and desire that she cannot contain her own stimulated flow

    I now feel insatiably satisfied and nourished from the poetic spread she laid out for me
    We passionately kiss and gently touch; the duration is longer and sustaining for us both
    Although our bodies screamed out to be pleasured; my mind told me it wasn’t the right time

    So denying our hormonal callings, we end our closeted rendezvous with a final brief kiss
    To extinguish, just for now, the flames of our hearts—until our next secret tryst…
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOOOHHH WEEEE

    My, my, my.....GQ
    Mi casa es tu casa!! :)

    A sista needs a warm wash cloth right about now! This piece is HOTLIKEFIRE!!

    Authentically yours - most definitely had me in the groove of things....

    I'm diggin' you.
     
  3. Destee

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    my heart smiled reading this peace

    very very nice GQ

    Destee
     
  4. alyce

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    you must know

    I COMPLETELY enjoyed every line of this piece! Your use of the language had me mesmerized, and filled with growing anticipation...yes, I'll be waiting to read the next chapter!

    Thank you for sharing,

    A
     
  5. msluciousb

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    BEAUTIFULLY DONE MY BROTHA!

    Now this was art in its purest and most precious form!
    Obviously born of love and admiration...
    Lucky woman!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:D
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    ummm hummm good




    One
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

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    bighead.


    ...how the hell did i manage to miss dis one??

    musta been posted during one of my hiatus periods...
    but! it's like they say... betta late than neva. right?? :D

    i love-did it... got me reachin' for my oxygen & ****! :lol:

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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