Black Poetry : SECRET TALK

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    From deep within
    a secret friend
    we talk on the
    silver line of the
    pathway

    crossing
    da lilly pond
    in the deep
    forest of mental
    we talk

    about the
    yeateryears
    and the commings
    of tomorrow

    secretly
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    secretly ok
    dig that
     
  3. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    wow, the secrets of the mental, loving this!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a poet true at that...
    deep within the soul
    you search his mind...
    a poet with a riddle..
    secretly ok
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shhhhh! lub dis.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mzblkangel...........on the path of moments the secret was
    told for me to hold and the mystery of a mind ......Thankz

    sudden.......the mental secretly has captured the majustic
    and it's to da mind where it's kept secretly under cover

    gempis........shhhhhhhhh!!! in the hush the secret was cast
    to da mental play of da mind

    thankz y'all........but i'm not telling yet !
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow........this played quite sweetly on the mind and heart

    feeling this deeply...

    the crafting of the words, were just like butter...mmmmm

    I truly enjoyed this Rich!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    angelicsage...........it was the mental play wit a twist
    in da moment of secret as the talk was captured
    Thankz 4 da read
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok you poet...
    for real i like the flow...
    now you dig that...this was deep
    makes you think....lol
     
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    wow
    a secret freind
    this is so gently
    very calming
    and relax
    as you walk
    that path
    with your secret friend
    very nice indeed
    Peace
     
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