Black Poetry : Secret Lovers

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  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Secret Lover
    It's a secret that we wanted to explore each other
    It's a secret that we kissed each other
    It's a secret that we have had desires about each other
    It's a secret that we had conversation about our fantasies about each other
    No one notices how we look at each other,or touch each other,
    or smile at each other occasionally,so that's a secret too
    It's a secret that we've spent mornings, afternoons and nights together making love over and over again.
    It's a secret that I love the way you stretch my legs from east to west, north to south
    and around the equator all together
    It's a secret that you Mr. make me scream every time
    It's a secret that this Mrs is reserved for you, cause I like you weak in the knees and moaning my name
    It's a secret that I have never experienced this kind of passion before
    It's a secret that I have ducked out, stepped out rearranged things and neglected some things, people and responsibilities so I could stay home with you so you could hold me, caress me, kiss me and make love to me
    It's a secret even to you that I carried your child
    It's a secret that I would give the world to you if it were mine
    It's a secret that I love you so very much
    But we can't call this secret "secret lovers" cause you don't love me, so we aren't lovers just partners in bed
    So the secret is I could be your "secret lover" for life
    but I can't just be your partner in bed ,so this secret is over.
     
  2. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ I was feeling that for real. You gotta do what you gotta do..mmhm Loved the scribe
     
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    WOW...this was one passionate piece. It hints of forbidden things yet reeks of sensual beauty too...lovely.
     
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    Like greggy I have to begin with wow. This piece was spicy in its description, and bold in its realization that what the two were just wasn't enough. Well written piece.
     
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    I'm feeling this piece too...goes back to my little preachy-ness in my poem "a kiss" about breaking this ugly cycle of casual sex because it only ends up hurting someone in the end...or causing unnecessary drama
     
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    Let all dark secrets come to light thru these eyes.

    Flow on... truth is revealed in you.
     
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    Round and round and round it goes...
    but the secret,
    Sits in the middle and knows

    I like the way you layed this one out poet.
     
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    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all
    sometimes you just got to let the hurt flow
    And let some go
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    stuff like this make me fall in love ....wow !!!
    i truely love this compassionate sweet release
    just yummy u know
     
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    Thanks Rich
     
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