Black Poetry : Secret Love...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my view of you has become distorted
    it seems to me you are in disorder
    unconciously runnin'
    inevitably runnin'
    and from what i can see all you need is some of my lovin'
    i secretly watch you from inside my window
    i want you to know it but i think it'll cast a shadow
    i've been feelin' somethin' inside of me for such a long time
    and i desperately tried to urge myself to change my mind
    but the feelin' seems to have a mind of its own
    purposely utilizing its power to overcome my own
    unexpectedly i've fallen so deeply for you
    i'm tryin' not to say the words but in my heart i know the truth
    i told myself that i would never fall again
    i would stand up in love as i was once told by a friend
    but you seem so different and thats how they all started out
    and when i influenced them that's when they wanted to go about
    leavin' me
    deceivin me
    and dejectin me down to tears
    but then again there's somethin' about this feelin' for you
    that helps me overcome my fears
    i guess i should go ahead and utter out these words
    just to get the thought off my mind and for once calm my nerves
    but for now i'll just remain here and be intoxicated by you
    and in my minds say i love you baby, i really truly do
    i have such a strong urge to free your soul to fly like a bird
    so please promise me that if i ever decided to tell you this
    you won't cast my soul in the fire to burn...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey LovelyGoldenOne
    this so deep....I remember having a secert love.nice thoughts ...nice flow..i like it much
     
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    so loved
    so warm
    so real
    da depth
    da feelings
    one's heart
    self emotions
    dis was awesome ............tyte!
     
  4. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Lovely, :wave:

    This is a very deep and heartfelt piece!!

    I like it!!

    I am so glad you shared this one.

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
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    Wow......girl.........dis was off the hezzzey fo sheezy <~~im tryin to be Like Snoop Doggg..Promise I won't do it again :D
     
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    this is a tyte poem, Lovely
    I think we've all been through
    this and can relate
    peace
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot sierra, swtt and scribe!!!!!!!!!!:)
     
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