Black Poetry : SECRET GARDENS

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Deep cross da fields
    down in da valley
    cross da river hills
    lay da secret gardens
    where daisy don't grow
    but rosary flowers of
    multi colors and crisp
    spring water runs
    enter cross da bridge
    of me unto da clappin
    bush of hope & free will
    as my heart awaits u
    by da well of wishies
    and spun da spool of love
    let da innocence
    of ya body move u
    and thy whispers be heard
    open da walls of ya eyez
    to da above moon hanging
    suspended like a chandelier
    from da starz filled ebon ceiling
    gleaming down flickering my
    wrath of love in a radiant glow
    enter da secret garden of me
    where pain no longer felt
    where sorrow is filled wit joy
    enter to taste happiness da
    essence of comfort wit great
    untouched caresses this garden
    many fruitful seasons unfolds
    forsaken me shall be not
    for this true love is red hot
    the blisten bliss is seal
    for the true heart dat's real
    kiss da diamond lips as we
    partake in tongue twist
    da sparkles of ya eyez glist
    in memories of a dream
    a place at da secret garden
    of love & faith i stand beside
    u hand n' hand
    face to face
    body & soul
    watering da new seeds we lay
    in da beauty of sunshine
    and hearts of love come upon me
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a vision, $$RICH$$! Whoa, this one is :hot: and beautiful at the same time.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was just to good
    it was sweet warm loving
    oh i felt the passion as i read it

    Deep cross da fields
    down in da valley
    cross da river hills
    lay da secret gardens


    you took me right here i am walking that road
    what a poetic ride you just took me on...
    i aint gone be no mo good tonight..wheeeew :flirt:

    where pain no longer felt
    where sorrow is filled wit joy


    i am in love witht the garden already
    this was a compassionate touch if i may say

    :kiss: :kiss:
    shoot i love this!!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As my heart touch ya skin my lips seal as my hand pen
    da moment to say thank u so much GEMPIS ! ur a rare jewel
    ya love need to know this ......

    So so Happy u took a ride on da bank of love into da secret gardens
    eyez flashing in da depth of love i thank u so much for the sweet embrace
    just far too kind sistah Angel ......it's nice to have an personal Angel wow!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your welcome..and thank you for this ride...
    b/c this was the one right here....smh
    yep your own personal Angel indeed.....
    you wanna come rub my wings now...QQ :blush:
    coz i ready to play in this garden..shoot...:lol:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    charmmmmmmmmmed !!!
    Da mission is near yet work before pleasure ...lol
    wings u say hummmmm! maybe i'll drop in for a few
    open ya window and pull the sheets back !making a
    crash landing
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D ...................
    :heart: :luvv: :blush:
    crash landing huh?...QQ
    you got some ummmm in ya i see :grin:
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    liked this $rich..
    loved its movement
    and build (crescendo really)
    to the pure joy...
     
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    indeed Angel ....

    Thankz so much Deepy i'm just in a upgrade mold
     
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    Entering the garden
    of you
    crossing the bridge
    seeing in through...
    Eyes laced within this Eden
    embraced by the sun's sheen
    It's the most beautiful garden
    that the lady has ever seen.
    Love and faith
    hand in hand
    The aura of your garden
    emanates across God's land
     
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