Quiet Poetry Lounge : SECRET CURVES

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Mar 23, 2009.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A twisted road of unknown ventures
    sweet melon on cascading twine
    curves hidden in caves above
    yet displayed notion of love

    Winding streets of somewhere
    bubbles like ginger snap
    reaching peeks of volcano's
    skin like morning sunshine

    pose curves like rocky mountain
    hooked and nanny to perfection
    drawz da heap of attention
    my heart lone to mention

    Like da third world i battle my motion
    the feelings a continue fight
    secrecy unbound not spoken
    seen as (mother may I) can't hold back

    secret curves of her .
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    secrets?

    or is she just "shy"

    lol

    for the record i'm not mad at those curves
     
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    Smh!!!!... maaan!

    Wheew...what it do? could you dig a lil deeper and expand on this...LOLOL!

    Im'ma get me some :wine: and enjoy!

    :em2900:
     
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    Like an unknown mountain path, swerving this way and that, to where does her road lead... Enjoyed your use of metaphor here, brother poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so'ja ....could be shy or just curvy and in hiding ...let me go deeper !

    Jazzytude .....without a doubt let me twist it some more to see deeper got cha !

    Watz .....I'm gonna follow the pathway to somewhere i'll let you know where it lead too

    Uplift19....smiling at cha ......as i glide deeper stay tune


    Thankz family as i go for this ride ....
     
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    $RICH$:
    Yes...some of them curves have to be
    a secret. Don't wanna take you too fast. lol
    Lovn' yo flo as always.

    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I have a Mustang road runner and i love hittin every curve like a whipper snapper
    but i can slow down and round each curve out to perfection yes take me slow !!!!

    hey sis been missing ya !
     
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    $$R$$
    Curves and bumps make the ride more exciting
    Hold on for the thrill ride.
    Love it as always.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'm holding tightly but firmly thatgirl74 just don't push me off the ride is fire !
    thankz dear.
     
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