Black Poetry : SECRET ADMIRER

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Untold tales of love
    a mystery held within
    her eyes like diamonds
    sparkling in depth of light
    she stolen my heart
    like a thief in da night
    she pose poetry
    to my soulful delight

    smooth as cream
    sweet as pie
    so beautiful my my my !
    from vision i glance
    feeling this us romance
    dancin in my heart
    that was taken
    she always on my mind
    as soon as i awaken
    her face with out flawz
    her body should be a crime
    by law , and she sway a
    deep beckon call raw

    she been held in secret
    my mystery yet we have
    gently kissed a million tymes
    leaving a precious shine
    my heart dine in it daily
    she is my love or maybe
    oh ! how i admire her
    the way she speak even
    her hair, she stacked up
    like a goddess of maze
    that set off my inner blaze

    she fill my heart wit bliss
    and moments of tenderness
    send signs of love
    something i treasure & hugs
    she old yet so new
    a suprise i can't be rude
    she may have a significant other
    so i will not intrude
    but her love i will never lose
    mis-use or abuse,
    how i lone to be in her world
    make her my uncover girl
    tell the world of this bliss
    of two who seek happiness

    Twisted effects lay on my mind
    maybe one day her heart i'll find
    perhaps someday her true love
    will be all mines
    it's only a matter of tyme
    fear me not my love is real
    and these secrets i wanna feel
    so this letter again i seal :smokin:
    to my ::
    SECRET ADMIRER ......................
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reflections of a true love that you admire...well ya know if the love is true it sure will come to you...heres a hint she maybe your secret admire as the verse flow your heart jumps....this letter made my heart skip this was sweet and loving...a little birdie told me she knows already and is awaiting you...

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like you need to find out more about this secret admirer Rich. Just go for it brotha. :) Very endearing vibe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    secrecy devor de loveth i know forth i seek and found
    in open writen letters i savor , held within da heart yes
    as i vamp through hints made to bring forth light of a
    secret admire ....Thankz Angel


    what one knoweth of is real i seek and found yet learning
    the maze of it and reveal the secrecy of thy loveth... Thankz Watz
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was the joint man and most def a tight write
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and i humble thank u for the words and support to this admired secret
    yet untold .......peace & harmony
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello and yes you've most definetly stolen my heart with this one. I can't help but feel like I know who this secret admirer is but I think in due time you will tell if I'm thinking in the right directon. This one sent chiils down my spine and I loved it.

    :donttell: :hearts3: :picture: :hearts2:
     
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    thankz soulful2006 as the secret reveals throughout yet untold of such
    love and beauty happy it touched u .................................................
     
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    Sometimes you get to me with the way you convey thoughts without saying them this is one of those moments. I ADMIRE that ability.
     
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    most humbled and graceful thank u very much .
     
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