Black Poetry : Secret Admirer

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Nov 16, 2003.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Overwhelmed by her beauty.
    Intoxicated by the heady aroma
    emanating from her every pore.
    Invading my senses like millions of tiny soldiers
    storming a new land's unprotected shores.
    I catch her eye, but due to my being shy,
    my incapability to strike up a convo, she just passes me by.

    And I sulk & wonder about the possibilities.
    Some may call it a daydream.
    I see us holding hands, making life plans.
    Then a blare from a horn snaps me back to the present.
    My eyes follow the queen stride down the street,
    a pure vision of elegance.
    Oh well, I tell myself, she's already spoken for.
    There's no way on earth for one as beautiful as she to be single,
    at least that's what I'm hoping for.

    If given the chance, I could be all the man that she needs & more.
    Together, we could explore the night skies
    tracing each constellation with intertwined fingertips.
    But I know that the chance must be taken if presented.
    That's the only way lonely nights can be prevented.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nicely posed..
    nice drop:angel1:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you just
    took my breathe away
    this is a beautiful drop
    Peace
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes this was beautiful, sounds like a VERY lucky lady.
    "Invading my senses like millions of tiny soldiers
    storming a new land's unprotected shores."
    ...this got me!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just enough sugar to make it sweet. If this is about you, I hope you stepped up to that plate.
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the positive feedback.

    W, I still have a problem with just stepping up, but I'm working on it.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If she knew who u were my brotha i am SO sure she would be just as stricken with you...as u are with her :)
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooo, this is so nice. I can relate, too. Once upon a time I was shy too, but it became more painful for me to not talk/ask than to take the risk. Peace, brothah.
     
  9. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful

    this was indeed beautiful. what a sweet drop. i know too many guys like this. here's a secret....

    we really would like you to approach us; looking in admiration just isn't enough. this happens too often and it's attractive for you to try even if the answer is no.

    take care

    -Roni
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti, I hope so.

    gempis, I feel what you're saying.

    Roni, I've taken into consideration what you said, and my mind is made up, it's better to try and get told no than to not try and probably have gotten a yes.

    Ola, thank you so much.
     
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