Quiet Poetry Lounge : SECRET ADMIRE I ADORE.

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Untold tales of love a mystery held within
    her eyes like black diamonds cascading
    sparkling in depth divine creamy skin
    she stolen my heart like a thief in da night
    she pose poetry to my soulful delight

    smooth as cream sweet as pie
    so beautiful to me my my my !
    from envision i stare in a glance
    feeling this hope & wish of romance
    dancin in my heart that was taken
    she always on my mind da moment awaken
    her face with out flawz her body should be a crime
    by law , and she sway a deep beckon call dats raw

    she been held in secrecy my mystery yet we have
    gently kissed a million tymes leaving a precious shine
    my heart beats rapidly on a daily base
    it's her love i lone to trace and humblely lace
    oh ! how i admire her wit body & soul
    when she speak her words like gold
    her silky hair i wish to hold and touch
    like a goddess of amaze she really stack up
    da set off my inner blaze and deepest desire

    she fill my heart wit bliss and a blazzin fire
    moments so tense yet feel so right
    send signs of love dat make me take flyte
    something i treasure & hugs inside my spirit
    upon her step i'll never be rude
    allowing me inside is really cool intrude
    i could never abandish myself or intrude
    her love i will never mis-use or abuse,
    how i lone to be in her world as her King
    make her my uncovered beautiful Queen
    tell the world of this bliss of two who seek happiness

    Twisted effects lay on my mind
    hope one day her heart i'll find
    perhaps someday her true love will be all mines
    it's only a matter of tyme before she respond
    fear me not my love is real and these secrets i wanna feel
    if she only knew how much i adore
    so this letter my heart now seal
    to a beloveth in secrecy my;
    SECRET ADMIRER
    :flowers::hearts4::10600::luv::em4700::em2200::luvv:
    :hearts1::hearts1::hearts1::luvu::hearts1::hearts1::hearts1:
     
  2. mizjoice

    mizjoice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep feelings expressed, but truly not hidden.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    can't hide what's deep inside
    out tale of a secrecy not touched
    thank u dearly and so much
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very lovely....not often does a man write beautiful poetry for a lady...a very rare thing these days...and a treasure if ever found.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Keep sake unto thee .....yes as it help bridge the gap.
    thank u sweet apple*pie
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhh thanks windy! didnt know u felt that way! just kidding!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hahahaha nevar see look at u ...well now u nevar can tell by looking ! smile Thankz
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love should never stay a secret, at least that's what I've always felt, even wrote a couple flows about it. Lovely scribe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes i guess u right because it's unfolding quickly and rapidly
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's how it should always unfold. It should never drag on and on, don't you agree? What a breath of fresh air it all must be :)
     
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