Black Poetry : Seconds of calm Fear ....in the collision

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (ps i have respect and love for the 2 other persons who were also in the collision and i like to keep them private...)



    this is no drivel..
    or snack ,an appetizer..


    I was ones hit by a car..
    but i was never in a car that hit sumthing...


    last monday night..


    Two road surface stoneblocks with a function unseen..
    brought us on a pitch and down in a hole..
    were sumthing hard pierces trough like a derrick al in a loud bang crash...

    I remembered that there was this moment of this loud smash..
    wich etrangled and paraluzed me....
    than this next moment that feld as if my head was falling in a big soft cloud..
    as if i was going to sleep and
    i wanted to stay there..
    i woke up from this loud high tone and this burning smell of a certain gass that was pushed in my longs...and at the same time i looked aside as i saw and the driver getting out that was sitting next to me screaming ...""get out get out"' followed by the person that was sitting in the back...(it went in a quick flash)
    i realised i was petrified....
    than i became aware of the situation now again..

    i knew i had to get out..
    In the minuts that my hands were reaching out to the belt...
    I was thinking ...
    dont explode dont explode... (reaching out for the belt)
    my eyes were close..

    these were seconds of calm fear..

    this could be it...
    well its all in youre hands lord.. (reaching out for the belt)
    it is not my will but yours..



    i found the button of the belt pressed it..my eyes opend and i got out and ran away from the car.....



    Scattered and dispersed ...
    we walked over the quiet highway...
    absend mindly.....




    We came to eachother...


    are you alright...yes..

    are you ok ...yes...

    only my hand a little bit the driver said...


    stay away from the car...

    we are still alive......and we hugged eachother tight....

    it looked like everyone was on vacation...
    empty street..

    they kept asking me are you alright..
    cause i was quiet....
    i,m ok and you...

    we hugged eachother..
    and we coninued what we had to do..
    call the police and everything..




    i was quiet .....


    but my emotions where pushed inside....
    that evening at my uncles house....
    i could not realy speak...


    i only saw everything over again..
    and emotions were going upside down inside......
    My uncle said we can all learn from it...
    and some are maybe even converted by it......


    i am thankfull we were saved...






    i was quiet....






    than....




    but now....


    thousands of emotions come ...



    and i dont know what to do with them...





    i feel unbalanced....



    maybe i am in a shock or sumthing...



    maybe it comming all out now....
     
  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was very interesting, u had my full attention
    i luved it and im glad u are alright
    i hope u make a pt2..lol



    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow...feeling every bit of this deep emotional scribe
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear getto ambition....thanks


    i know you dont mean it like that....(i,m not saying it mad but just serius)



    but there will be no part 2 to this ...


    this was a terrifying situation...


    and i am still dealling with it ...


    i am thankfull that i am alive...



    but i am


    i am confused ...







    i dont know wich way to go...
    now...



    i knew it before...


    i am still walking lost on that highway when i got out that car than..







    and i have this PAIN in my nek that is hurting me...
    and somthimes i see hazy....

    i already went to the dokter he says i have to keep it warm...



    but thanks for youre responding poet ....
    and you keep writting to...
    if i have the time i will read sumthing of you..


    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u welcum poet
    but dont mean it like wuh?

    and i kno it wud be wrong of me to say i kno wuh u r going thrught, cuz i dont
    so ima say i got an idea of wuh u r going through, but yes i kno it is hard cuz i am goin thrugh things in my life as well, but just keep yo head up doh and dont give up becuz a wise person once told me dat pain only makes u stronger, but ima have u in my prayers, no liez dats on the real, and i hope u get through it
    much luv



    blackluv and bp


    :angel1:
     
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    We love you here, Auroraflower, and delight in your well being.
     
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    flo on poet, flo on.
     
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