Black Poetry : Second Progression

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (for SGP, my dark angel)

    "Elevation" must have
    been your true birthname
    using the soundex
    my soul cried out
    and I found you
    in advance
    gaining ground into
    the development of
    a prolific
    sorcerer of spoken
    and silent word
    presenting an
    alto-tenor
    overture in
    acapella
    with the prelusion of
    a solo symphony....
    and you sang it
    all in chord "D"
    just for me ~
    You have the
    ability to reorganize
    seasons each year
    rotating
    Autumn, Summer, Spring, and Winter
    and the command
    of your words
    that would make
    anomolies become
    regarded more regularly
    and
    so
    we
    feed....off of
    one another's energy
    I second-- your (e)motion
    and support you
    in each of your
    gradual degrees of
    learning ME
    and I want
    to give you
    my all
    even though you are in your ascent
    I'd like you to know
    that I would
    rise with you
    through to your
    second progression
    because for me
    you are ~~ "time"...well...spent



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!

    I don't know who this fella be but seems like you've been going up and down lately. Hee,hee,hee. You go on with your bad self. Sometimes it's hard but sometimes it's rewarding.
    Loved your scribe.
    Desert Storm
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhh, the growing pains

    felt when living life as
    a "learning tree"...
    one's leaves must be watered
    and bathed in warm
    sun and recieve the
    proper amounts of CO2
    in order to create the
    process known to us as
    photosyntheseis...
    and I'm am GREEN with envy!!
    Cause I'm growing...
    Nah, gurl - thank you for the
    comps!!
     
  4. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amun-Ra

    Glad you liked the piece!
    Thanx for stoppin' by and
    for posting a response.
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2-

    *hello nikki G, it's me blakverb...meet my friend N2...she'll be ready to bear the torch when you get tired" sistergurl, it I haven't said it enough your skillzzzzzzzzzzz are tigghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhht! keep doin' what you do!

    one love, blak
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you think that....

    and brotha, I don't care
    what they say about ya' --
    You're #1, #2, and #3....and so on!!
    Glad YOU liked this depth.....
    Thanks 4 erythang ya' do and for the
    SoulurN2 -- whatcha'self...
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now if he don't get this:

    "even though you are in your ascent
    I'd like you to know
    that I would
    rise with you
    through to your
    second progression
    because for me
    you are ~~ "time"...well...spent"

    he needs to get the beatdown. That was beautiful and very well received. I am enjoying your creativity.


    One
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I definitely agree...

    and ya' know you are CORRECT!
    If he don't get it - he'll mos' def'
    get the big BEATDOWN!!
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For lack of a better description for this and all your flowz...I'll just shake my head and say...

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~N2!!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


    :heart:
    GQ
     
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