Black Poetry : Seasons (haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Nov 11, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    raking in the leaves
    I gather what was summer
    making space for snow

    be
     
  2. JNubian

    JNubian Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahh BE:

    You've hit my "nature" button with this piece. Love when you Haiku!!

    JNubian
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartbeat

    This is truly, truly, beautiful. You grasped the hearbeat of the changing seasons.
     
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    this is what I love about

    the art form "haiku".... in a beautiful nuggat....you can capture so much...soo powerfully. Your haiku is exquisite, indeed, BE.

    thank you

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    making room

    like 4 seasons of love
    u open the winter gates:D
     
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    Yessss.....HB......

    The beauty of the seasons......


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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