Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Nov 11, 2001.
raking in the leaves
I gather what was summer
making space for snow
You've hit my "nature" button with this piece. Love when you Haiku!!
This is truly, truly, beautiful. You grasped the hearbeat of the changing seasons.
this is what I love about
the art form "haiku".... in a beautiful nuggat....you can capture so much...soo powerfully. Your haiku is exquisite, indeed, BE.
like 4 seasons of love
u open the winter gates
The beauty of the seasons......
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