Black Poetry : "..seasons" (by angelicsage & j'h.)

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in his eyes

    today...
    intermittent sky..
    intervals
    of
    sun and rain,
    the garden sings dually
    of you and me...
    a symphony of the u-n-i verse collides
    planets
    winds
    tides
    directed by a violet ray inside..
    your sky.. me.
    let me cry..
    shed my tears on you- soak you, my earth
    perhaps to sow years into our eternity
    and
    release a passionate heat to dry you naturally..
    l'm here
    l'm clear
    through the hot trails of summer...
    under blue sky linings of autumn...
    through harsh chills of winter
    then spring..
    we enter
    the fifth season-
    unseen


    (and in her eyes)

    today...
    a simple calla lily...
    bloomed, just for you
    and from beyond the scalloped edges
    of varying shades of white
    interludes of light... ribboned the sky
    My eyes, were drawn
    to the open blues, through which
    your presence shined
    And I, as the simple flower
    Sat beneath... heaven's saturation
    wistfully longing
    as she cried....... for us
    in an ocean... of blue, turquoise...
    washing away, fears
    replacing eternity's tears
    with hope, promise and serenity
    of future seasons... whether
    burnt sienna kisses of autumn
    or the crisp diamonds of winter
    our reflection will remain forever...
    in each drop that falls
    ...no matter the season...
    when heaven cries...
    it is..... you and I
    ...that falls from her eyes.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so beautiful sweet and lovely wow!
    y'all woke up my warm spot
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First things First....My Poetic Reflection...

    So full of pleasant suprises...

    you are truly...my poetic :heart:

    the waters of my soul...are delicately splashing

    joy...the unforseen season...XOXOXOXO

    by the way...I love it... :wink:
     
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    Your seasons seem to encompass all that is right, all that is wrong, and all that is uncertain, poured the mixture into a thread and just let it flow....speechless...Wonderful sage and j'h.
     
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    :jawdrop: I am stunned by the imagery. Oh my, oh my. You two have outdone yourselves this time. :bowdown:
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was awesome, just breath taking, like it was meant to be...thanks for adding flavor to the stage...very nicely done by two.
     
  7. caramelpython

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    :driveby: Beautiful drop u 2.. feeling your vibes flowing up n here! :wave:
     
  8. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww, this was so hot. I was like dang, these two work so well together. This deserves so much hype. Much luv to the both of you cause this piece was sho nuff off the chainz.
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich...waking up warm spots...is our specialty...
    :kiss: Much, much love to you.
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister...you captured the essence of this piece in your reply...
    and that is exactly the beauty of all the seasons...they encompass
    everything...and there are always new beginnings...Thanks!
     
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