Black Poetry : Seasonal Waves

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Winter snow... pure and cleansing of the earth...
    Those days brought fourth many births...
    of leaders and followers...
    Saviors and Haters....
    Incompetence of nature...
    Not reconginizable of the stature
    of our own society...
    it continues to fall...

    Spring brings many baby showers....
    Carnations, Roses, and so many more flowers...
    and the hours pass where we once saw an undeniable form...
    Where those that lay wish the world would reform...
    but to conform in a great way
    That we may rise to a better day..
    As the sun begans to grow...
    While it melts the snow...
    cleansing our earth...
    Drying up our land....

    Giving us Summer Tans...
    With the heat blazing...
    And kids raising...
    ruckus in the streets....
    Stepping to anything they think they can beat....
    Violence and danger....
    No stranger to the life of a Wild child....
    Clubs here...Money their...
    Summer time fun....
    Easy Access to any drug...
    Just let them know you want some...
    Beach parties and Rag top Convertible...
    Chics half naked in the color purple...
    Sex and more sex....
    Accusation and sensation...
    Penatration....
    Kids making babies...
    Everything just crazy....

    Fall comes around...
    Everyone leaves town...
    And all is cool...
    The kids go back to school...
    Cops don't act too much like a fool....
    And the leaves turn gray...
    Crunching up more and more everday...
    Yards are a mess...
    And I must confess....
    I love those Seasonal Waves....
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BRAVISSIMO !!!

    Yo SHA !!!!!!
    THIS IS SOO SO **** NICE....ITS GOT IT ALL SIS...**** I LIKE...NO IM LOVIN THIS DROP..4 REAL.
    TYGHT CREATION...PERIOD

    ONE
    G-MAN
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U JUST DONE IT AGAIN

    CREATION OF A MASTERFUL FLOW
    IN DA WINTER SNOW SUMMER HEAT
    FALL OF SPRING U DID YO THING GURL
    NICE PIECE OF WORK .......LOVIN' IT SIS....:heart: :kiss:
     
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    Sha-Sha....


    this piece made me long for the Fall...
    & wish for the return of Spring... &
    every thing in between!! i loved the
    flow of this one, My sister! :)

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
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    Gypsyman: Thanks!!! I'm glad you liked it. I kind of thought you would though being that we both like those nature rhymes... ;)

    Rich: man you are always showing me love. I bet you are such a sweet heart in person... thanks for the Comps...they are truly appreciated coming from a writer like yourself...

    GA: Ms. Peach!!! Waz Up miss lady?!!! I'm glad you diggin this flow... Hopefully one day i can be just like you!!! :p
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shane

    how did you know??? I live for the winter and fall. Beautifuly done.
    Wish I could fast foward tyme.





    One
     
  7. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honestly...

    I really didn't but we all have our favorite seasons...I'm with you...I look forwards to fall and winter.... My warddrobe is totally different...I'm a sweater person...probably one my reasons why i want to move back up north... LOL...but anyways rambling as usual...

    thank you...I'm glad you enjoyed it...and i couldn't agree with you more on the fastward...I can't count how many times I've thought about that idea...if it was only in my power...we would have your fall and winter season right now....:toast:

    :p
     
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    just looking back in time and seasons ......and sweet releases
     
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    I like how this was broken down and laid out.
    Tyte flo for real
    One love
     
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