Black Poetry : SEARCHING

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by pamela b, Mar 18, 2008.

  1. pamela b

    pamela b Member MEMBER

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    I stand out side with my hands held high, my finger tips stretching...stretching tryng to touch the sky to recieve, the answers from above , if everyone else can find true love...

    why not me?

    I question Eloiheem, am i that bad? I look good, taste good, feel good, and work real hard too. I give my **** best in every thing i do! ....... yet love eludes me nontheless,

    why not me?
    Daily i pour out my flesh and enter my spirit woman,she cries silently in pain to find an answer to this question because.....**** it hurts!

    I think,.. May be.... i should change my walk, or the way i move , but i can't because my body is so in tune with ...my spirit,... my mind, ....my heart,.. everything that makes me, has it's own little groove.

    I've come to one conclusion and this has got to be true, I'll stop looking for love so it can find me too. :qqb018:
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This.....I Love!!!!!!:)
    Wonderful; Poem Pamela
    Equisite Execution and Expression!
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    GOD Bless
    and Flow On:)
     
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    Everything that makes you, is meant to be, you're special in your own right, we all are. We're not meant to be carbon cobies, a copy never has the same luster as the original. Shine on, and yes, that special one will see you, and appreciate you.
     
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    Hey my sweet Sister Pam! You already know where I stand on this... When we remove ourselves from unhealthy situations only then can what we yearn and seek find us! I know...easier said than done! But we are STRONG!!!! And I am here for you!

    Excellent piece Queen!
     
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    Thank you so much. sometimes when we get caught up in what we want, we forget that God has the plan that will not be redirected. Not even by our own foolishness.
     
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    pamela b Member MEMBER

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    :dance1: :qqb023: :qqb023: Thank you Queen. Your words of wisdom continually ring in my ear. So much love comin' at cha !
     
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    :bowdown: I must slute this piece, In finding you...you have found the Universe!!
     
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