Black Poetry : searching

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, May 31, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Searching for reasons
    to love u more
    seeking hope
    of what we restored
    looking for the season
    of growth and how
    we once loved
    i wave my hand
    and confess my all
    i give it a screammin
    call but yet u can't
    see or feel
    refused to taste
    my thrill of chills
    i wonder this day
    and think of what
    we missing
    so i kiss da sky
    saying bye
    until i search for
    true reasons why !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Searching for reasons
    searching to explain
    wondering why
    it has caused so much pain.
    What you see as screaming
    could be whispering to another
    A call out from a friend
    a lover like no other
    perhaps the fruit was tasted
    perhaps the wine was savored
    maybe the subtlety of it
    was not really favored
    But don't give up
    searching for more reasons
    The truth is there
    in every single one of those seasons....


    This was a deeply written and felt piece, Rich.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    searching,is such a long process
    loving this piece Rich very heart felt
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed searching can take u deep into
    the unknown to fine what one seeks
    thanks sistah watz......................

    so true sensualReality it can be very long
    and go very deep a process that hold no ending
    thankz sistah
     
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    I am most def feelin this. One of the lessons I've learned in recent years is not to kill myself tryin to figure out answers to questions that may never be known. Love the way ya laid this down, sweets.
     
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    indeed surely we hold no clue into tomorrow
    it can be painful when u search for what's not
    their .....thankz sis for the lovin support gempis
     
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    like the way u laid this
    deep thoughts.....
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    big ups and thankz angel
     
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    Sort of a double edged sword...if you don't search, you won't get hurt discovering there is nothing there... of course if there is something there, you'll never know, and you could miss out on Eden. Decisions, decisions in this life, man....
     
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    indeed watz so i search the wells of tomorrow seeking
    the inner beauty of a soul so my heart would know by
    reasons .....yet if it become painful i know the mending
    is to follow ....thankz for the wise drop
     
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