Black Poetry : Searching for Love!(part one of the love challenge)

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't know what if feels like.
    Don't know what looks like.
    Don't know what its been like.
    I just know that I'm looking for love.
    All my life for that one love.
    In my life that I dream of.
    For the chance I can hold you
    so near.

    Don't know what it looks like.
    Don't know what it feels like.
    Don't know if I 've ever been loved.
    But I know that this one time.
    In my life just this one time.
    For the rest of this life time.
    If I find....
    I am looking for love.
    Searching for love.
    Reaching for love.
    Just one time!
    BJS(C)2003:love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    seek no more !
    cross da bridge
    true love it be
    all depth and care free
    u can feel da love
    hold it too
    it even speaks to u

    da love is a touch
    tender with care
    a soulmate
    ya heart can bare
    seek not
    forth i here
    have no fear
    and cross ova !
     
  3. renae

    renae Active Member MEMBER

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    go gurl!!!!

    it's love that i seek
    but why does it keep evading me?
    if i stop and take a look around
    will i realize that love i have already found?
    when my heart is willing to accept love
    mayb that's when God will send 1 of His angels from above


    luved ur poem..i'll just wait 4 luv 2 find me..sometimes luv is right under our nose...but i wouldn't know cuz i don't know what it looks like either!!!:)
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and i know just like you laced part 1

    part 2 gone be even betta




    One
     
  5. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see somebody couldn't wait ti get started...Contest doesn't officially start until Feb 1.
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's alllright. Mslb is just warming up.
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo bishop...

    I see this sister couldn't wait to get jump on the challenge...now a brother gots to go into his special book and bring the heat LoL...queen this piece was nice, bring the part 2.

    blak

    P.s. Don't know what it feels like? I've got the answer.....
     
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