Black Poetry : searchin' the sun for darkness*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (for those people that always seem to pull negative from any situation)*


    hey you...
    it's hot over thea
    you travelled 93 million miles justa
    search the sun for darkness--

    you
    always pryin' happiness from the sunshine's rays--
    just be happy--
    if not...
    just be--

    stop worryin' 'bout when--
    things seem 'ginst ya--
    just live--'cuz
    show as you alive--
    things gone be for ya
    and 'ginst ya

    i know hate personally--
    and sunshine and i have long sips'a ras'berry ice tee
    on long hot summer ebenin's an'
    to tell ya troof*
    darkness don't even come at night--
    the world just turns the other cheek...
    so..
    u gone!
    git frum over there--
    stop searchin' the sun for darkness--
    cuz bout the only thing you gone find dark--
    is
    yo
    own
    krispy
    black
    ***...


    (think about it)


    sean.
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LOVE THIS!!!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  3. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet !

    Bravo !!!!

    peace
    g-man
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean,

    Very, very, very tight flow brotha!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for reading

    :sand: so happy that you all felt my vision

    GQ
    GYPSYMAN
    wildflower7


    thank you!!!


    sean.
     
  6. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    LOL :lol:

    awww man ... the title of this peace is OFF 'DA HOOK !!!

    then i read it only to find more more joy deep inside
    very nice work again ThePoetSean

    lef' me laff'n and there's nuth'n i luv to do more than laff

    cuz bout the only thing you gone find dark--
    is
    yo
    own
    krispy
    black
    ***...


    :lol:

    Destee
     
  7. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you liked it Destee...

    laughter is the best medicine...


    sean.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seany!....


    ... i lovedid this!!! it made me smile. :)

    & i thought of this sayin' that one of my girls
    always uses...

    "don't hate! it ain't cute!" :lol:

    writeonepoet.

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  9. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank ya Gifted Artist...

    for eye blessin' my spot...:nuts:

    i'm watchin u 2!


    sean.
     
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    um

    sean i could go on and on about how much i love your ****
    but i love your **** man

    dawg i felt this the art man
    is fierce son

    keeping do your thing
     
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