Black Poetry : SEAHORSES

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waiting, being patient not knowing the day nor the time
    Did you come this close to let me view you again
    I wonder in my mind
    If you want me come and say so, it wont be considered a forward thing
    I can appreciate a lady that tells what she wants and what she dreams.

    They say everything you wanted to do, and everyone you want to meet.

    Is separated from you in reality
    By six degrees of separation.


    It’s all on the line
    I have possibly this chance, one more time
    To make a long awaited dream come true.

    It took twenty years
    You look so beautiful

    I dreamed of this time
    Now you’re separated from me by one degree.

    I shall meet our mutual friend, and perhaps meet each other again
    Starting the beginning of long overdue bliss
    Being torn like a sheet, not knowing the approach
    Contemplate all the words, then the movements, going back and forth in my mind

    It’s destined to happen, and the meeting will be
    Again holding you CHERIE will set me free

    I must not blow this
    One chance and i know this

    The approach it being too close at hand
    Must be initiated,

    This year In a well-executed plan.
    Only one shot and it must go off

    It’s a gamble I’m a gambler but so much can be lost.
    Set it up with no long hesitation
    Heart beat pounding like an army of a nation

    I am frightened, over concerned and afraid I won’t succeed
    Knowing regardless of how it turns out
    I must do this out of need

    Another chance a sweet eyed glance
    A few moments before a single spoken word
    Taking in the fact
    I stand before you and about to concur and explore you
    Has me very nervous…and all concerned.





     
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    Hoddee,
    Starting the beginning of long overdue bliss
    Being torn like a sheet, not knowing the approach
    Contemplate all the words, then the movements, going back and forth in my mind

    This describes right here. Love your beautiful words.
    Desert Storm
     
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    BROTHER HODEEE!!!! Look at you getting all romantical and stuff shoo lol you remind us of the beauty of subtle nuances and romance :) bravo brother! :)
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister Triniti424
    Thank You for the read. I recall some of the flows you shared with us.
    How deep they are, and still are wonderful reads.